Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời quá ngắn và chứa lỗi thì; cần trả lời trực tiếp bằng thì quá khứ và mở rộng bằng chi tiết cụ thể (mô tả loại xe, tuổi khi có xe, kỷ niệm liên quan). Sử dụng liên từ để làm câu mạch lạc và giữ tối đa 3-4 câu.

例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. It was a small red bike with training wheels, which I got when I was seven. I used to ride it to my friend’s house every afternoon, and I remember feeling very proud when I learned to ride without the training wheels.

提案: Câu trả lời một từ, thiếu lý do và ví dụ hỗ trợ; cần nêu quan điểm rõ ràng, đưa lý do cụ thể (ví dụ: giao thông, chi phí, xu hướng thể dục) và có thể so sánh hoặc dự đoán để làm câu phong phú hơn. Dùng liên từ như 'because', 'for example' để liên kết ý.

例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many students and office workers cycle to school or work to avoid traffic and save money. I also notice more people cycling for exercise on weekends.

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I had.

The question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' is in the past simple, so the answer must use past tense. 'Have' is present tense; the correct past form is 'had'. Suggestion: use past simple verbs to answer past simple questions, e.g., 'Yes, I had a bike.'

× Yes, I think.

✓ Yes, I think so.

The question 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' expects an opinion; the short response 'Yes, I think.' is grammatically acceptable but sounds incomplete. Adding 'so' completes the expression 'I think so', which is a common and natural way to agree with the previous yes/no question in present tense. Suggestion: use 'I think so' to give a concise, natural-sounding agreement.