Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Vous avez répété la question au lieu d’y répondre. Concentrez-vous sur une réponse directe avec une phrase thème, puis ajoutez une ou deux phrases de détails (par exemple âge, fréquence d’utilisation, souvenirs). Évitez la redondance et limitez-vous à 3–4 phrases. Utilisez des connecteurs simples comme "and", "but", "so" ou "when" pour lier vos idées.

例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was eight and I rode it almost every day after school. I especially remember learning to balance with my father's help, which made me more confident about cycling.

提案: Vous avez répété la question au lieu de donner une opinion. Donnez d'abord une réponse claire (yes/no/partly), puis expliquez brièvement avec des raisons et un exemple précis (par exemple infrastructures, météo, habitudes). Utilisez un ou deux connecteurs pour structurer la réponse et restez naturel et concis.

例: Yes, I think bikes are fairly popular, especially in cities where there are bike lanes and cycle-sharing programs. However, many people still prefer cars because public transport can be unreliable and weather is often rainy.

× Did you have a bike when you when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The sentence repeats the phrase 'when you' causing a redundancy and breaking sentence structure. Remove the duplicate 'when you' so the question is clear and grammatically correct. Suggestion: read the sentence aloud and remove repeated words; focus on maintaining one time clause 'when you were a child' after the main clause.

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

This sentence is grammatically correct and needs no changes. It uses correct subject-verb order, tense, and plural form. Suggestion: no action needed.