Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn cần cải thiện cấu trúc câu, thì động từ và độ chính xác từ vựng. Trả lời nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng (ví dụ: "Yes, I did."), tiếp đó nêu thêm 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể bằng thì quá khứ đúng (ví dụ: khi nào bạn được tặng, ai tặng) và dùng liên từ để liên kết ý. Tránh lỗi chính tả (ride → riding/ride, write → ride?) và sai từ (about me → for me). Giữ lời nói tự nhiên và không quá dài (không quá 5 câu).

例: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a bicycle when I was seven, and I rode it almost every weekend. I especially enjoyed racing with my friends around the neighborhood because it was exciting and helped me stay active.

提案: Bạn nên đưa câu trả lời trực tiếp kèm lý do rõ ràng và chi tiết cụ thể. Tránh lặp từ không cần thiết và sửa ngữ pháp (bicycle is 9 không có nghĩa). Nên dùng từ vựng phù hợp để mô tả mức độ phổ biến và lý do (ví dụ: tiện lợi, rẻ, thân thiện với môi trường). Dùng liên từ để giải thích (because, so, therefore). Giữ tối đa 3 câu rõ ràng.

例: Yes, I do. Bicycles are quite popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. Many people also choose them to avoid traffic and reduce pollution.

× Yes I did. I have a ride bicycle that's my parent about me when I was 7 and I used to write it to the past every day weekend because I love racing with my friend.

✓ Yes, I did. My parents bought me a bicycle when I was seven, and I used to ride it every weekend because I loved racing with my friends.

Errors: incorrect verb tenses and wrong verbs used. 'I have a ride bicycle' is ungrammatical and mixes present and past; use past simple 'My parents bought me a bicycle'. 'that's my parent about me' is incorrect phrase; likely meant 'my parents bought me'. 'when I was 7' should be 'when I was seven' (write out small numbers in formal writing). 'I used to write it to the past every day weekend' contains wrong verb 'write' instead of 'ride', wrong time expression 'every day weekend' -> 'every weekend'. 'because I love racing with my friend' mixes present 'love' with past context; use past 'loved' and plural 'friends' to match 'racing with friends' as a habitual activity. Suggestion: use consistent past tense for past habits and choose correct verbs (buy/bought, ride/rode), and correct time expressions like 'every weekend'.

× Yes, I do. Yes, I do because bicycle is 9.

✓ Yes, I do, because bicycles are popular.

Errors: sentence is ungrammatical and contains nonsense 'bicycle is 9'. The examiner asked about general present opinion, so present simple is appropriate: 'Yes, I do'. The reason clause should be a clear explanation: 'because bicycles are popular'. Also use plural 'bicycles' when speaking generally (general statements about a category use plural), which fixes a singular/plural issue implicitly. Suggestion: provide a meaningful reason and use present simple for general truths, and use plural nouns for generalizations.