Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Improve grammatical accuracy and add brief supporting detail. Use past tense for childhood, provide a topic sentence and one short supporting detail (max 2–3 sentences). Avoid single-word replies.

例: Yes, I did. I had a red bicycle when I was about eight; I used it to ride to school and play with my friends on weekends.

提案: Make the response more concise and grammatically correct, use linking words to structure contrasting ideas, and give one specific example or reason. Keep the answer within 3–4 sentences and avoid filler words (uh, yeah).

例: I think bicycles are generally not very popular in the Philippines nowadays, but they became much more common during the COVID-19 pandemic. For example, many teenagers and commuters started cycling because public transport was limited and people wanted safer, cheaper ways to travel.

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

The examiner asked 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' which is in the past tense. The student's response uses present perfect ('I have'), which does not match the past context. Use the simple past 'I did' to refer to possession in childhood. Suggestion: match the tense of your answer to the question (use past tense for past-time questions).

× I think in the Philippines bike are most likely not that popular, but way back in pandemic times, uh, it was, yeah, it was very popular, especially for the teenagers.

✓ I think in the Philippines bikes are most likely not that popular, but back during the pandemic they were very popular, especially among teenagers.

Several issues governed by the provided list: the noun 'bike' should be plural ('bikes') to agree with plural verb 'are' (singular/plural issue and subject-verb agreement). 'Way back in pandemic times' is awkward; use 'back during the pandemic' for clarity. 'It was' refers to plural 'bikes', so use 'they were'. Also use 'among teenagers' rather than 'for the teenagers' for natural phrasing. Suggestions: make nouns and verbs agree in number, keep tense consistent (past when speaking about the pandemic), and choose prepositions/phrasing that suit general statements ('among').