Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ слишком короткий и не раскрывает тему. Следует начинать с прямого утверждения, затем добавить 1–2 подробности (когда, как часто, с кем катались или особенный воспоминание). Используйте связки (for example, when, because) и избегайте односложных ответов. Максимум 3–4 предложения.

例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven and rode it almost every day after school. For example, I often cycled to the park with my friends and we would race each other until sunset.

提案: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и недостаточно конкретики. Следует давать полные предложения, согласовывать числа и артикли (bikes are popular), дополнить причинами и примерами (where they are popular, who uses them). Используйте связки (because, especially, for instance) и по возможности приведите конкретные детали о вашей деревне.

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially in rural areas. In my village many people use bicycles for short trips because shops and schools are nearby, and they are cheaper and more convenient than cars.

× Of course it's popular.

✓ Of course they're popular.

The subject is 'bikes' (plural), so the verb must agree in number. The original 'it's' contracts 'it is' which is singular and incorrect. Use 'they're' = 'they are' to match the plural subject. Also using 'of course' is fine. Suggestion: identify the subject before choosing singular or plural verb forms.

× I live in village.

✓ I live in a village.

In English, singular countable nouns normally require an article or another determiner. 'Village' is a singular countable noun, so it needs 'a' (or 'the' if a specific village). The original omits the article, which is incorrect. Suggestion: use 'a village' for a non-specific village or 'the village' if referring to a specific one.