Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời quá ngắn và sai thì (thời thì). Nên trả lời đầy đủ với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, dùng thì quá khứ cho hành động trong quá khứ, và bổ sung 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ (ví dụ về loại xe, ai tặng, kỷ niệm). Dùng nối từ nếu cần mở rộng.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bicycle when I was a child, which my parents bought for me on my seventh birthday. I used to ride it every afternoon around the neighborhood, and it helped me feel independent.

提案: Câu trả lời không liên quan và không rõ nghĩa. Trả lời cần đọc hiểu câu hỏi, nêu quan điểm rõ ràng về mức độ phổ biến của xe đạp, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và cung cấp lý do hoặc ví dụ cụ thể. Dùng liên từ để nối ý nếu mở rộng.

例: Yes, I think bicycles are fairly popular in my country, especially in smaller towns where people use them for short trips. For example, students often cycle to school and many families own at least one bike for weekend rides.

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

The examiner asked a question about the past: 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' The student used 'have' (present tense) which does not match the past tense question. Use the past simple 'did' for short answers to past simple questions: 'Yes, I did.' This maintains tense agreement and is the appropriate short response form. Suggestion: For past simple questions starting with 'Did', respond with 'Yes, I did.' or 'No, I didn't.' rather than using present tense verbs.

× I think my call pizza in my country.

✓ I think bicycles are popular in my country.

The student's sentence is ungrammatical and does not match the question 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' Errors include wrong vocabulary ('call pizza'), missing verb agreement and structure. The corrected sentence uses the subject 'bicycles' and the present simple 'are popular' to answer a general present-tense question about popularity. Suggestions: Use clear subject and verb to state opinions about general truths: 'I think + [subject] + are/is + adjective.' For example, 'I think bicycles are popular in my country.'