Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap daha doğal ve dilbilgisi açısından doğru olmalı. Kısa ve doğrudan bir konu cümlesi kurduktan sonra, bir veya iki destekleyici cümle ekleyin (örneğin hangi yaşta sahip olduğunuz, nasıl kullandığınız veya neden sevdiğiniz). Bağlaçlar veya zaman ifadeleri kullanarak cümleleri mantıklı bir sıraya koyun. Ayrıca doğru zaman ve artikel (a/an/the) kullanımı üzerinde çalışın.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was seven and used it to ride to my friend's house almost every day. Because it was lightweight and easy to handle, I learned to ride quickly and enjoyed exploring the neighborhood.

提案: Cevap anlaşılır değil ve dilbilgisi hataları içeriyor. Önce doğrudan görüşünüzü belirtin (evet/ hayır ve neden), sonra popülerlik seviyesini destekleyen spesifik bir örnek veya karşılaştırma verin. Bağlaçlar (for example, because, however) kullanın ve gereksiz kelime veya seslerden kaçının.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities you often see bike lanes and many students commute to school by bicycle, which makes cycling a common and practical choice.

× Like. Yes, I have bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The student used the present tense verb 'have' and omitted the article 'a' while the question asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so the correct form is past tense 'had' and include the indefinite article 'a'. Also remove the filler 'Like.' which is unnecessary. Suggestion: use past tense to match the time reference and include articles before singular countable nouns.

× MMM yes, in my positive your country.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The student's reply is ungrammatical and mixes pronouns incorrectly ('my' and 'your') and the phrase 'in my positive' is incorrect. The question asks about general popularity, so use 'I think' plus a clause: 'bikes are popular in my country.' Suggestion: use 'I think' to express opinion, avoid mixing possessive pronouns, and form a complete clause to answer the question.