Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response simply repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. For a better score, give a direct answer (yes/no), then add 1–2 brief supporting details using linking words. Keep it natural, concise and avoid unnecessary repetition.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought for me when I was seven, and I used to ride it to the park every weekend. Because the area was quiet, I could practice safely and became quite confident.

提案: Your answer states a clear opinion but has hesitations, a repetition and a pronunciation/word error ("pre prefer"). Improve fluency by removing pauses and repetition, and add a supporting reason with a linking word. Use accurate vocabulary (e.g., "prefer"); keep the response to 2–3 sentences.

例: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because most people prefer cars for convenience and comfort. For example, long commutes and limited cycling infrastructure make driving a more practical choice for many.

× No, I don't think so. No. No, many people in my country pre prefer to use cars instead of bikes.

✓ No. I don't think so. Many people in my country prefer to use cars instead of bikes.

Grammar problem type IDs: 6 (Present tense issue) and 26 (Sentence structure errors). The student wrote 'pre prefer' which is a typo/reduplication and incorrect verb form; the correct present tense is 'prefer'. Also the sentence starts with repetitive 'No' and punctuation is awkward. Suggestion: remove the repeated 'No', keep a single 'No' and use 'prefer' for present simple to express habitual action. Ensure only one negative response and write the verb once: 'Many people in my country prefer to use cars instead of bikes.'