Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two concise supporting details using linking words. Keep it natural and avoid asking the examiner to rephrase. For example, state whether you had a bike, give a brief reason or memory, and finish with one short extra detail (max 4–5 sentences). Focus on simple correct grammar and relevant vocabulary (e.g., "bike," "ride," "learned," "neighbourhood").

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I learned to ride it in my neighbourhood when I was seven, and I used to cycle to school most days. Because the area was quiet, I felt safe practicing, and I remember loving the freedom it gave me.

提案: Answer directly and use a full sentence with correct word choice and simple linking words to give one specific reason or example. Avoid single-word or unclear replies. Aim for 2–3 short sentences that explain why bikes are popular (e.g., convenience, cost, exercise) and, if possible, give a brief comparison or result.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use them because they are cheap and convenient for short trips in cities, and they are also good for exercise. For instance, a lot of students and office workers cycle to avoid traffic and save money on transport.

× I don't know, can you start with me? Umm I want to speak with beginning. I don't know how to give answer to this question.

✓ I don't know. Can you help me start? Umm, I want to begin speaking. I don't know how to answer this question.

The original contains run-on and awkward phrasing. 'Can you start with me?' is unclear; 'help me start' fits the context. 'Speak with beginning' is ungrammatical; use 'begin speaking' or 'start speaking'. Also 'give answer' should be 'answer'. Suggestions: break into separate sentences, use 'help me start', 'begin speaking', and 'answer this question'. Please practice forming short clear sentences and using common verbs collocations like 'help me start' and 'answer a question'.

× Yeah, Baker Popular in my country.

✓ Yeah, bikes are popular in my country.

The original has multiple issues: 'Baker' seems to be a mispronunciation or wrong word; context expects 'bikes'. 'Popular' requires a verb to agree with the plural subject: use 'are'. Suggestions: ensure the correct noun 'bikes' and include the verb 'are' for present simple statements about general facts: 'Bikes are popular in my country.'