Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer the question directly with a clear topic sentence about whether you had a bike, then add one or two specific supporting details (briefly). Use correct grammar and avoid repeating the examiner's question. Keep it natural and within 1–3 sentences.

例: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. I used it almost every day to ride to the park with my friends, and I remember learning to cycle without training wheels when I was seven.

提案: Start with a clear, grammatically correct topic sentence stating your opinion. Then give one or two specific reasons or examples, using proper nouns (children, schools) and linking words (because, for example). Correct grammar and concise phrasing will improve your score.

例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many children use them to commute to school. For example, in my neighborhood, about half of the students ride bicycles every morning to save time and avoid traffic.

× Yes, bikes are popular in my country because a lot of a lot of Childs use that to go to their school.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because many children use them to go to school.

The sentence has several grammar errors: 'a lot of a lot of Childs' is redundant and uses incorrect capitalization; 'Childs' is an incorrect plural form. Use 'many children' (irregular plural). 'that' is wrong as a pronoun for 'bikes' (plural and inanimate); use 'them'. 'their school' is acceptable but unnecessary; 'to go to school' is more natural and general. Suggestion: simplify to 'many children use them to go to school.' This corrects singular/plural and pronoun reference issues and improves fluency.