Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is too short and ungrammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then add one or two brief supporting details (where you rode it, how often, or who you rode with). Keep it natural and no more than 3–5 sentences. Use correct grammar: say “Yes, I did” or “No, I didn’t,” then expand.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that I rode around my neighborhood almost every day after school. My parents bought it for me when I was seven, and I often rode with my friends to the park.

提案: Your answer gives an idea but is repetitive and has grammar mistakes. Begin with a clear opinion (Yes/No/Somewhat). Then give one or two specific reasons and use linking words (for example, because, so, therefore). Correct singular/plural and avoid repeating phrases.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting to avoid traffic. For example, I often see commuters and students riding bicycles to work and school, especially in crowded city areas.

× Did my.

✓ Yes, I did.

The student's reply 'Did my.' is incomplete and ungrammatical: it lacks a subject and a full verb phrase. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). The correct short answer to 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' is 'Yes, I did.' or 'No, I didn't.' Use the auxiliary 'did' with the subject 'I' to form a proper short answer. Suggestion: answer with a complete short response like 'Yes, I did' or a full sentence such as 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.'

× Because I've seen a lot of people riding bike instead of instead of using vehicle.

✓ Because I've seen a lot of people riding bikes instead of using vehicles.

The original sentence has two issues that match the provided list: singular/plural errors (ID 1) and article/word form issues (ID 22). 'Riding bike' should be plural 'riding bikes' to agree with 'a lot of people.' Similarly, 'using vehicle' should be 'using vehicles' or 'using a vehicle' depending on meaning; here plural 'vehicles' matches 'a lot of people.' Also remove the duplicated phrase 'instead of'. The sentence also uses present perfect 'I've seen,' which is fine for this context. Suggestion: use plural nouns to match the plural subject and avoid duplicate words.