Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly using correct tense and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then give one or two brief supporting details (reason or memory). Use linking words if adding details. Keep it within 2–3 sentences and correct grammar (e.g., "didn't have").

例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I lived in a busy city where my parents preferred I walk or use public transport for safety, so I only rode bikes occasionally at friends' houses.

提案: Give a clear opinion and support it with specific reasons or examples. Use present tense for a general statement (e.g., "are popular") and linkers like "because" or "for example" to add detail. Avoid vague phrasing like "two Wheeler" without context; say "motorbikes" or "bicycles." Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

例: Yes, bikes are popular in my country because many people find motorbikes convenient and affordable for commuting. For example, in large cities you can often see commuters using motorbikes to avoid traffic and save on fuel.

× No, no, I don't have a bike when I was a child.

✓ No, no, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The sentence refers to a past time frame ('when I was a child') so the past simple tense should be used. 'Don't have' is present simple and does not match the past context. Use 'didn't have' for negative past statements. Suggestion: use past simple for actions or states that occurred in the past, e.g., 'I didn't have a bike.'

× Yes, bikes are popular in my country as people used to go to office by a two Wheeler.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because people used to go to the office on two-wheelers.

Several issues: 'as' is acceptable but 'because' is clearer for cause. 'Go to office' requires the definite article 'the office.' The phrase 'by a two Wheeler' is unidiomatic; use 'on two-wheelers' or 'by bicycle.' Also 'two-wheeler' should be hyphenated and plural if referring to people generally. Suggestion: use 'on' for riding modes and include 'the' before specific places like 'the office.'