Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be direct with correct grammar, give a brief but complete answer, and add one or two supporting details using linking words. Use past tense for past experiences and correct article usage.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I used it to ride to my neighbor's house every weekend.

提案: Improve grammar (subject-verb agreement), complete unfinished sentences, and use linking words to organize reasons. Provide a specific example or statistic to make your answer more concrete.

例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially for short trips and among students. For example, many university campuses provide bike racks, and because bikes are cheap and easy to park, about 30% of students cycle to class.

× Yes, I have bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The question asks about possession in the past ('when you were a child'), so the verb should be in the past tense. Change 'have' to past tense 'had'. Also a singular countable noun requires an article 'a' before 'bike', which is addressed by using 'a bike'. Suggestion: Use past tense 'had' and include the article: 'I had a bike.'

× Yes. Bike are quite popular in my country, especially for short trips and among students.

✓ Yes. Bikes are quite popular in my country, especially for short trips and among students.

The subject is plural 'bikes', so the verb should be 'are' which is correct, but the noun was written as singular 'Bike' without plural inflection. Correct by making the noun plural: 'Bikes are...'. Also capitalize only if starting sentence: 'Yes. Bikes...' Suggestion: Make the noun and verb agree in number: 'Bikes are quite popular...'.

× Many people choose them because they are cheap and easy to park, and some cities have.

✓ Many people choose them because they are cheap and easy to park, and some cities have bike lanes.

The clause 'and some cities have' is incomplete; it needs an object to complete the meaning. Add the missing noun phrase that refers to infrastructure, e.g. 'bike lanes' or 'cycling lanes', to clarify what cities have. Suggestion: Complete the sentence by specifying what cities have: 'and some cities have bike lanes.'