Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 直接回答了专业，但“covers the topics like”不够自然；可用“includes subjects such as”。“and so on”较笼统，建议补充一个具体课程或学习内容。

例: I’m studying Chinese language and literature. My courses include writing, classical Chinese and modern Chinese, as well as literary analysis.

提案: 回答明确，也解释了原因。注意应说“high expectations”，并可具体说明哪方面困难，让内容更有细节。

例: Not particularly. I had high expectations for the major before I started university, but I’ve found some of the classical texts quite challenging to understand.

提案: 原因清楚，但有明显语法和搭配问题：“it's wasn't”应改为“it wasn't”，“attending in”应改为“attending”。“wanted to choose”可简化为“wanted to study”。

例: Actually, it wasn’t my first choice. I initially wanted to study journalism and communication, but the university I attend doesn’t offer that major, so I chose Chinese language and literature instead.

提案: 回答直接，理由也相关。可把“learn Chinese language and literature”换成更自然的“study”，并将单数职业改成复数或用“work as”。

例: Yes, I think it’s quite popular in China. Many students study Chinese language and literature because they hope to become Chinese teachers or work in the civil service.

提案: 计划内容相关，但句子有多处表达问题：“in within”重复，且“a master’s degree in”后缺少内容。建议分清近期毕业计划和之后是否读研，避免句子过长。

例: Yes. I plan to finish my undergraduate degree next year, and I may go on to do a master’s degree. Over the next few years, I’ll focus on getting good grades and exploring my options.

提案: 内容清楚，但主谓一致应为“the benefits … are”。建议用连接词组织两个优点，并具体举一个尝试新事物的例子。

例: One of the main benefits of being my age is that I have more freedom to make my own choices. I also have the time and energy to try new things, such as travelling or learning a new skill.

提案: 回答有转折，内容也充分。注意固定搭配是“devote time and effort to something”，不是“on it”；也可以稍微具体说明现在感兴趣的部分。

例: No, I don’t. Although I wasn’t very interested in it at first, I’ve devoted a lot of time and effort to my studies over the past three years. Now I find Chinese literature fascinating, especially the way it reflects different periods of history.

提案: 回答直接，原因合理。不过“because”和“so”同时连接因果，略显重复；后半句可精简，避免重复提到早晨学习。

例: I prefer studying in the afternoon because I usually feel sleepy in the morning. I can concentrate much better after lunch, so I get more work done.

提案: 注意时态应使用“spend”，因为是在描述目前的习惯。平行结构应为“studying effectively and not getting too stressed”；也可说明这十小时如何分配。

例: I spend about ten hours a week studying and doing assignments outside class. I think that’s a good balance because I can keep up with my work without feeling too stressed.

提案: 回答有个人态度，但“so far”在这里不自然；可说“at the moment”。“stay at university forever”听起来夸张，建议解释实习中压力的来源，并用更自然的表达收尾。

例: Not really, to be honest. I’m doing an internship at the moment, and I sometimes feel stressed by the workload and responsibilities. For now, I’m more comfortable focusing on my studies.

提案: 答案简洁且切题，但“take photos of the lecture”不够准确；可以说拍摄课堂笔记或课件。“extra lecture videos”也可换成更自然的“additional lesson videos”。

例: I mainly use my iPad when I study. I take photos of lecture slides and use educational websites to watch additional lesson videos, which helps me review difficult topics.

提案: 问题和具体细节都提到了，但“an improvement in the dormitory”较笼统；可明确说希望学校翻新宿舍。“linking pipes”可能应为“leaking pipes”，并可用“which”引出影响。

例: I’d most like the school to renovate the dormitories. Some walls are mouldy, and a few pipes are leaking, which makes the rooms uncomfortable and can affect students’ health.

× My major is Chinese language and literature which covers the topics like basic writing, ancient and modern Chinese and so on.

✓ My major is Chinese language and literature, which covers topics like basic writing, ancient and modern Chinese, and so on.

这里的 topics 是泛指后面列举的课程内容，不需要定冠词 the。泛指复数名词时通常不加冠词。

× Actually, it's wasn't my first choice.

✓ Actually, it wasn't my first choice.

it's 是 it is 或 it has 的缩写，不能和 wasn't 同时使用。此处应直接用 it wasn't，表示“它不是我的第一选择”。

× I wanted to choose journalism and communication at first, but the university I'm currently attending in doesn't offer that subject.

✓ I wanted to choose journalism and communication at first, but the university I'm currently attending doesn't offer that subject.

attend 表示“就读、上学”时是及物动词，后面直接接学校，不需要加 in。建议记住 attend a university，而不是 attend in a university。

× Yes, I aim to successfully complete my undergraduate degree in within the next year and possibly continue with further studies like a master's degree in, so I have to study hard over the next five years.

✓ Yes, I aim to successfully complete my undergraduate degree within the next year and possibly continue with further studies, such as a master's degree, so I have to study hard over the next five years.

within the next year 已经表示“在接下来一年内”，前面不需要再加 in。master's degree 后面的 in 也没有接宾语，因此应删除。

× I think the benefits of being my age is I have the freedom to do what I want and I have the energy and time to try new things.

✓ I think the benefits of being my age are that I have the freedom to do what I want and the energy and time to try new things.

主语 benefits 是复数，因此谓语应使用 are，而不是 is。这里用 that 引出 benefits 的具体内容，句子结构也会更清晰。

× No, I don't. Although I didn't love it at first, I have devoted a lot of time and effort on it over the three years and now I find it fascinating.

✓ No, I don't. Although I didn't love it at first, I have devoted a lot of time and effort to it over the three years, and now I find it fascinating.

固定搭配是 devote time and effort to something，表示“把时间和精力投入到某事上”，不能用 on。建议记住 devote ... to ... 这一搭配。

× I spent 10 hours a week studying and completing my assignments.

✓ I spend 10 hours a week studying and completing my assignments.

问题询问每周通常花多少时间，描述的是习惯或常规情况，应使用一般现在时 spend，而不是表示过去的 spent。

× I think it's a good balance between learning effectively and do not getting too stressed.

✓ I think it's a good balance between learning effectively and not getting too stressed.

between 后面的两个部分应保持平行。learning 是动词-ing形式，因此另一部分也应使用 getting；否定时把 not 放在 getting 前面，不用 do not getting。

× No, I'm doing an internship so far and whenever I'm working I feel stressed so I would prefer to stay at university forever.

✓ No, I've been doing an internship so far, and whenever I work, I feel stressed, so I would prefer to stay at university forever.

so far 表示“到目前为止”，通常与现在完成时或现在完成进行时连用，因此这里应将 I'm doing 改为 I've been doing。描述每次工作时都会有的感受，用一般现在时 whenever I work 更合适。