Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答总体清楚并直接，但语句有些冗长且存在小语法问题（如时态与时间状语的搭配）。可将信息分成两句以提高自然度，并注意简洁表达。建议把“currently”与“last month”放在不同句子中，或使用简单过去描述已完成的动作。

例: I'm a college student majoring in law. I just finished my sophomore year last month.

提案: 回答不自然且有语言错误（介词使用和地名表达不正确），信息不完整。应直接说出地点并用正确介词，注意词序。若不想给具体地名，可以说所在省/城市。

例: I study at a university in Zhejiang Province. It's about an hour from the provincial capital.

提案: 回答包含有用信息但开头有无意义词语且句子较冗长。应以主题句开始，然后用一到两个连贯句子补充细节，使用连接词使表达更流畅并减少重复。

例: Yes, I think it's a great place to study. We have a large library for reading and self-study, and there's a peaceful lake where students relax after long study sessions.

提案: 观点明确但语法有错误（主谓不一致、冗余表达）。可用条件句更自然地提出建议，合并重复短语并给出具体改进理由或影响。

例: I think the library should have more tables and seats because they are usually fully booked, especially during exam week.

提案: 回答目标明确，但句子结构重复且有语法冗余（多次使用“and”）。建议先给出直接答案，再用一两句解释理由，保持句子简洁并使用正确名词短语（undergraduate period → undergraduate studies）。

例: I would like to pursue a master's degree in law because undergraduate studies are quite broad, and a master's would allow me to gain deeper, more specialized knowledge.

× I'm currently a college student majoring in law and I have just finished my sophomore year last month.

✓ I'm currently a college student majoring in law, and I just finished my sophomore year last month.

句中使用“have just finished”和时间状语“last month”冲突。现在完成时（have finished）通常与未指明具体过去时间的时间状语连用，而“last month”是明确的过去时间，应使用一般过去时。建议改为“just finished”或把“last month”去掉并保留现在完成时。

× Our university is located into a Jungian province at.

✓ Our university is located in a Jiangxi province.

短语用法错误：表示“位于某地”应使用介词in而不是into或at。地名拼写可能有误，我将“Jungian”改为更常见的“Jiangxi”（如为其他省份，请替换为正确省名）。另外介词顺序应为“located in [place]”。

× Learning. Yes I think so.

✓ Yes, I think so.

“Learning.”不是完整句子，缺少谓语和明确意思，应删除。面试回答中可直接说“Yes, I think so.”以表达同意。

× There is a large library in our campus for reading and self studying and also there is a lake as well.

✓ There is a large library on our campus for reading and self-study, and there is also a lake.

“in our campus”中的campus前应使用介词on表示校园范围（也可视语境用at）；“self studying”更自然的名词形式为“self-study”；“also”位置更自然放在“there is also a lake”中，且句子需要逗号连接。

× After we have finished a long period of study we can relax there.

✓ After we finish a long period of studying, we can relax there.

此处描述习惯性或将来常发生的动作，应使用一般现在时“finish”而不是现在完成时“have finished”。另外“a long period of study”更常用“a long period of studying”或“a long study period”。建议用现在时以匹配句意。

× I think it would be better if the library there are more tables and seats set in the library.

✓ I think it would be better if there were more tables and seats in the library.

原句主谓不一致且结构混乱。“there are”与虚拟语气“would be better if”搭配应使用过去式“were”；“set in the library”多余且位置重复，直接说“in the library”即可。修正为虚拟语气的正确形式。

× You know we have to book seat earlier in the library especially on the final week.

✓ You know we have to book seats early in the library, especially during the final week.

“book seat”应为复数“book seats”或“book a seat”；“earlier”与比较对象不明，改为副词“early”；“on the final week”介词用法错误，描述期间应使用“during the final week”。

× If possible, I would like to get a master's degree in the future because the knowledge we learn in undergraduate period is broad and I think and it will be much better if I can get deeper knowledge of law.

✓ If possible, I would like to get a master's degree in the future because the knowledge we learn during the undergraduate period is broad, and I think it would be much better if I could gain deeper knowledge of law.

句中时态和语气需要一致。将“we learn in undergraduate period”改为“we learn during the undergraduate period”更自然；主句使用条件语气“would like”时，后面从句中表示与愿望相对的可能性，应使用“would”或“could”而不是“will”或“can”。因此把“it will be much better if I can get”改为“it would be much better if I could gain”。此外“get deeper knowledge”可换成“gain deeper knowledge”更地道。