Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: ضع جملة موضوعية واضحة ثم أضف تفصيلًا بسيطًا لتوضيح وضعك (مثلاً سنة الدراسة أو التخصص). تجنب الاختصار المبالغ فيه. يمكنك أيضًا إضافة جملة قصيرة تربط السؤال بالخلفية المستقبلية إذا لزم الأمر.

例: I'm a high school student in my third year. I'm focusing on science subjects because I plan to study engineering at university.

提案: قم بصياغة الجملة بشكل صحيح زمنياً واذكر اسم المدرسة أو المدينة إن أمكن لتكون أكثر تحديدًا. تجنب كلمات التعبئة مثل "umm" و"there" بدون توضيح. قدّم تفاصيل زمنية صحيحة مثل "for three years" بدلاً من تركيب خاطئ.

例: I study at Al-Noor High School in my hometown. I have been studying there for three years.

提案: قدّم رأيًا واضحًا ثم ادعم رأيك بتفاصيل محددة ومترابطة باستخدام أدوات الربط. أصلح الأخطاء النحوية واذكر أمثلة ملموسة عن المدرسة (مثل المعلمين، المختبرات، الأنشطة). تجنّب الكلمات المبهمة أو الجمل غير المكتملة.

例: Yes, it's a very good place to study because we have experienced teachers and well-equipped science labs. For example, our chemistry lab has modern equipment that helps us understand experiments better.

提案: بدلاً من إجابة قصيرة جدًا، أعطِ إجابة مباشرة ثم أوضح سببك أو اذكر تحسينًا واحدًا إن وجد. الإجابات المقتضبة تقلل من فرص إظهار مهاراتك اللغوية. استخدم جملة انتقالية إذا تود إضافة توضيح بسيط.

例: Not really, I'm generally satisfied with my school. However, it would be nice if they extended library hours so students could study after classes.

提案: قدّم جملة موضوعية واضحة عن خطتك المستقبلية وصحّح الأخطاء (مثل "I plan to take the IELTS test"). اذكر سبب اختيارك للبلد أو نوع الجامعة وأي خطوة عملية تخطط لها. استخدم أدوات ربط بسيطة لتوضيح التسلسل الزمني.

例: I plan to take the IELTS test and then apply to universities in the US or the UK because I want to study abroad. I hope to enroll in an engineering program and prepare my applications next year.

× I was studying there for three years ago.

✓ I have been studying there for three years.

This sentence incorrectly mixes past continuous with a time expression 'three years ago'. Use present perfect continuous (have been studying) to express an action that started in the past and continues to the present. Also remove 'ago' when using 'for three years'. Tip: Use 'I have been studying there for three years' to show ongoing action.

× Yeah, it's really good place to study.

✓ Yeah, it's a really good place to study.

The noun 'place' needs an article. Use the indefinite article 'a' before singular countable nouns. Tip: Use 'a' or 'the' appropriately: 'a place' for any place, 'the place' for a specific place.

× Uh, we're studying math science and I will Culture is so good.

✓ Uh, we're studying math and science, and the school culture is really good.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and mixes structures. Separate items with 'and', include 'and' between 'math' and 'science', and use a clear clause 'the school culture is really good'. Also add the definite article 'the' before 'school culture' for clarity. Tip: Keep list items parallel and form complete clauses for opinions.

× My future study plans is to finish the eyelids test and go to American, uh college or British college because I want to go there.

✓ My future study plans are to finish the entrance test and go to an American or a British college because I want to study there.

Subject 'plans' is plural so use 'are' (subject-verb agreement). Also 'eyelids test' seems incorrect — likely 'entrance test'. Use articles 'an' before vowel sounds and 'a' before consonant sounds when referring to 'American' or 'British college' as nonspecific choices. Finally, use 'study there' instead of 'go there' for clarity. Tip: Ensure verb agrees with the subject and choose correct words ('entrance test').