Study— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更简洁并且语法正确。注意时态和冠词（例如: I recently graduated, a senior high school）。可以先用一句主题句直接回答，然后用一到两句补充细节，避免重复词汇。

例: I'm a student. I recently graduated from senior high school and plan to study biomedical science in the UK. I'm excited because studying abroad will give me access to better research facilities.

提案: 注意时态一致与重复词语（删除多余的“because”）。句子应更自然、具体，提供一到两个具体理由并用连接词衔接。

例: I studied at an all-boys senior high school. I felt comfortable there because my classmates shared a similar sense of humor and attitude toward responsibility, which made daily life more relaxed and enjoyable.

提案: 避免口头禅（如 umm, yeah）並改正语法错误（eg. one of the greatest schools; I didn't have good grades）。结构上先给直接回答，再用具体理由支持，细化如何受益。

例: Yes, it's a very good place to study. It is one of the top schools in Taiwan, so the atmosphere is academically strong and my teachers and classmates motivated me. Even though my grades weren't high, I could ask questions freely and learn from higher-achieving peers.

提案: 回答要更准确简洁，注意从句和时态（e.g. since it is an old school; I wish they had replaced some lab equipment）。可以指出具体哪些设备以及为什么有改进的必要。

例: Yes. I wish the school would upgrade the science laboratories. Many instruments are outdated, for example the microscopes and centrifuges, which limits students' ability to do modern experiments.

提案: 句子结构混乱且有语法错误（e.g. after I pass my IELTS and get my visa; biomedical science opportunities are limited）。建议先直接回答计划，再说明原因并用连接词组织原因，提供具体目标。

例: I plan to study biomedical science at a university in Manchester after I pass the IELTS and obtain a visa. I want to study abroad because biomedical research opportunities and facilities are limited in Taiwan, and studying in the UK will give me access to better labs and internships.

× I'm a student that just recently graduate from Senior High School and I'm ready to study abroad in the UK to major in biomedical science.

✓ I'm a student who just recently graduated from Senior High School and I'm ready to study abroad in the UK to major in biomedical science.

错误类型：过去时错误。原句使用 now 状态描述已完成的动作“graduate”应为过去式“graduated”。另外，定语从句中使用“who”比“that”更自然用于指人。建议：把动词改为过去式并将“that”替换为“who”。

× Where do you study? / I've studied in a male only Senior High School and so I feel quite comfortable about that because because male shows similar sense of humor or responsibility, so it's quite fun to study in a school only with boys.

✓ I've studied at an all-boys senior high school, so I felt quite comfortable because boys show a similar sense of humour and responsibility; it's quite fun to study in a school with only boys.

错误类型：介词及表达不当。“study in”可改为“study at”更常用；“male only”顺序应为“all-boys”或“boys-only”。时态上下文用过去完成/过去式更自然（已学完）。此外重复了“because”，并且“male shows”主谓不一致且用词不自然，应改为“boys show”。建议：使用正确介词、调整词序、修正时态并改正主谓一致。

× because because male shows similar sense of humor or responsibility, so it's quite fun to study in a school only with boys.

✓ because boys show a similar sense of humour and responsibility, so it's quite fun to study in a school with only boys.

错误类型：单复数问题。原句用“male”作为可数名词且动词用单数“shows”，但语境指一类人应使用复数“boys”并搭配复数动词“show”。建议：将“male”改为“boys”，动词改为复数形式。

× Yeah, umm, because I'm studying one of the greatest school in Taiwan and which ranks about the second of all Senior High schools.

✓ Yeah, umm, because I studied at one of the greatest schools in Taiwan, which ranks about second among all senior high schools.

错误类型：冠词/数一致错误。原句“one of the greatest school”应为“one of the greatest schools”（one of 后接复数名词）；“which ranks about the second of all”表达不自然，应为“ranks about second among all”或“ranks second among”。建议：把名词改为复数，调整从句连接和比较结构。

× So everybody is very smart and clever and I'm a student that has not a good grade, so I can ask a lot of questions about that.

✓ So everybody is very smart and clever, and I'm a student who does not have good grades, so I can ask a lot of questions about that.

错误类型：代词/结构使用不当。原句“that has not a good grade”结构错误，应使用“who does not have good grades”或“I don't have good grades”。建议：使用“who”指人，使用正确的助动词和名词复数形式“grades”。

× Would you like the place where you study to make any changes? / Yeah, a lot. But there's one thing I that I really want my school to change is that since it was a very old school, some laboratory devices are very old also, so I wish they could change it before I graduated.

✓ Yeah, a lot. But one thing I really want my school to change is that, since it is a very old school, some laboratory devices are very old, so I wish they could change them before I graduate.

错误类型：代词/时态混用问题。原句有多处问题：多余的“that I”、从句时态应与现在事实一致用“is”而非“was”，“laboratory devices”是复数应用代词“them”，以及“before I graduated”与说话时态不一致，应为“before I graduate”。建议：删除多余字词，统一时态，代词与数一致。

× What are your future study plans? / I'm planning to study biomedical science in Manchester after I passed my IELTS test and get my visa on biomedical science are a quite limit in Taiwan so I want to go abroad to get more resources and facilities and opportunities.

✓ I'm planning to study biomedical science in Manchester after I pass my IELTS test and get my visa. Biomedical science programs are quite limited in Taiwan, so I want to go abroad to get more resources, facilities and opportunities.

错误类型：句子结构错误与时态错误。原句“after I passed my IELTS test and get my visa”时态混乱，应保持将来时间“after I pass... and get...”；“on biomedical science are a quite limit in Taiwan”词序和用词错误，应为“Biomedical science programs are quite limited in Taiwan”。建议：拆分长句为两句，统一时态，使用正确名词短语和形容词“limited”。