Opportunities— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答基本切题，也提供了具体活动（电脑课程），但存在明显的时态、搭配和句子结构问题。可以说“technology was new to me”，而不是“is new for me”；“where I was in primary school”应改为“when I was in primary school”。此外，避免重复使用“computer technology”，并使用“because”和“so”自然地连接原因和结果。建议按照“直接回答 + 具体活动 + 个人感受”的结构组织答案。

例: Definitely. When I was in primary school, I took a computer class because technology was still quite new to me. I learned how to use basic software, and I found the lessons really interesting.

提案: 回答表达了赞同观点，但没有直接说明“尝试不同事情”的好处，且“take part in some challenges by themselves”搭配不自然，“academic skills or practice”意思不清。建议先明确回答“Yes, I think people should...”，然后说明原因，并加入一个具体例子或结果。可以使用“because”“for example”和“as a result”等连接词，使逻辑更清晰；同时避免把“different things”全部替换成“challenges”。

例: Yes, I think people should try a variety of activities whenever possible. This can help them discover their interests and develop useful skills. For example, someone who joins a sports club may become more confident and learn how to work in a team.

× Definitely When I was a child I was interested in computer technologies because I think computer technology is new for me so I took part in a computer class where I was in primary school.

✓ Definitely. When I was a child, I was interested in computer technology because I thought computer technology was new to me, so I took part in a computer class when I was in primary school.

主句描述的是童年时期的经历，因此应该使用过去时。将“think”改为“thought”，将“is”改为“was”，以保持全句时态一致。建议：讲述过去经历时，注意把现在时动词改为过去时。

× Definitely When I was a child I was interested in computer technologies because I think computer technology is new for me so I took part in a computer class where I was in primary school.

✓ Definitely. When I was a child, I was interested in computer technology because I thought computer technology was new to me, so I took part in a computer class when I was in primary school.

形容词“new”通常与介词“to”搭配，表示“对某人来说是新的”，所以应说“new to me”，而不是“new for me”。建议：记忆固定搭配“be new to somebody”。

× Definitely When I was a child I was interested in computer technologies because I think computer technology is new for me so I took part in a computer class where I was in primary school.

✓ Definitely. When I was a child, I was interested in computer technology because I thought computer technology was new to me, so I took part in a computer class when I was in primary school.

“where”用于引导地点关系从句，但这里表达的是“当我上小学时”，表示时间，因此应使用“when”。建议：表示时间用“when”，表示地点才用“where”。

× Of course, in my opinion, I prefer people to take part in some challenges by themselves After taking part in some challenges, people can improve their skills such as academic skills or practice.

✓ Of course, in my opinion, I prefer people to take part in some challenges by themselves. After taking part in some challenges, people can improve their skills, such as academic or practical skills.

“academic”和“practical”都是修饰“skills”的形容词，结构保持平行。“practice”是名词，不能与“academic”并列修饰“skills”。建议：并列修饰同一个名词时，要使用词性一致的词，例如“academic or practical skills”。