Opportunities— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?
受験者
Yes. When I was a child, I got an opportunity to perform a dance with my classmates. We went to another school to give to give a performance.
試験官
Should people try as many different things as they can?
受験者
Yes, because when people try different things, they can get something special and fresh, fresh. Only through this new experience can people experience different things.
評価
総合
Part 1
Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?
スコア: 72.0提案: 回答切题，也提供了具体活动和地点，结构基本清晰。但“got an opportunity”不如“had the opportunity”自然；“perform a dance”可以改为“perform a dance routine”，“give to give”是明显重复错误。建议再补充一个结果或感受，并使用“so”或“as a result”连接细节，使答案更完整。
例: Yes, I did. When I was a child, I had the opportunity to perform a dance routine with my classmates. We visited another school to give a performance, and I felt excited because it was my first time performing in front of a large audience.
Should people try as many different things as they can?
スコア: 62.0提案: 回答表达了“应该尝试不同事物”的观点，但理由比较笼统，且“fresh, fresh”和“experience...experience”重复，影响自然度。“get something special and fresh”含义不够明确。建议使用“broaden their horizons”或“discover their interests”等更准确的表达，并加入具体例子或结果，同时用“For example”连接细节。
例: Yes, I think people should try a variety of activities because it helps them broaden their horizons and discover their interests. For example, someone who tries a new sport may find that they really enjoy it and decide to take it up regularly. It can also make life more interesting.
文法
× We went to another school to give to give a performance.
✓ We went to another school to give a performance.
“to give”被重复使用了一次，造成句子结构错误。表达目的时只需要使用一个不定式结构“to give a performance”。
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