Opportunities— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevabınız soruya doğrudan yanıt veriyor ve birkaç etkinlik örneği sunuyor; ancak zaman kullanımı ve fiil yapılarında önemli hatalar var. “I have” yerine geçmiş zamandan söz ettiğiniz için “I did” veya “I had” kullanmalısınız. “I participate the courses” yerine “I took part in basketball, swimming and English courses” demek daha doğaldır. Ayrıca “but I don't regularly go to” ifadesi eksik kalıyor; “I didn’t attend them regularly” şeklinde tamamlanmalıdır. Cevabı daha akıcı yapmak için “For example” ve “However” gibi bağlaçlar kullanın ve etkinliklerden birinin size nasıl katkı sağladığını belirtin.

例: Yes, I did. When I was a child, I took part in basketball, swimming and English courses. However, I didn’t attend them regularly because I was quite busy with school. For example, I especially enjoyed swimming because it helped me stay active.

提案: Fikriniz anlaşılabilir, ancak cevap hem çok kısa hem de bazı ifadeler doğal değil. “Yes, they are” yerine soru “Should people...?” şeklinde olduğu için “Yes, I think they should” demelisiniz. “New things improve the people” ifadesi yerine “trying new things helps people develop” veya “helps people grow” kullanın. “They feel they feel good” tekrar içeriyor; bunun yerine “it makes them feel more confident” gibi daha spesifik bir sonuç verin. Cevabı bir neden ve kişisel ya da genel bir örnekle genişletin; “because” ve “For instance” gibi bağlaçlarla fikirlerinizi birbirine bağlayın.

例: Yes, I think people should try as many different things as they can. It helps them discover their interests and develop new skills. For instance, someone who tries a new sport may become healthier and more confident. However, they should choose activities that genuinely interest them rather than trying everything.

× Yes, I have, uh, when I was a child, I participate the uh, basketball course and swimming course and English course, but I, I don't regularly go to.

✓ Yes, I did. When I was a child, I participated in basketball, swimming, and English courses, but I did not attend them regularly.

The question is in the past tense, so the answer should use did rather than have. The past form participated is also needed because the activity happened during childhood. Use did not instead of do not for the same reason. To improve, identify the tense in the question and keep the entire answer consistent with it.

× I participate the basketball course.

✓ I participated in the basketball course.

The verb participate is followed by the preposition in, not used directly before an activity or course. The correct pattern is participate in something. Remember common verb-preposition combinations, such as participate in, interested in, and listen to.

× I participated in basketball course and swimming course and English course.

✓ I participated in basketball, swimming, and English courses.

More than one course is mentioned, so the plural noun courses is required. In addition, when listing several subjects, it is more natural to use the plural form and avoid repeating course unnecessarily. Practice checking whether the noun refers to one item or more than one item.

× Yes, uh, they are, because new things improve the people and they feel they feel good.

✓ Yes, they should, because trying new things helps people grow and makes them feel good.

The question asks whether people should try different things, so the answer should use the modal verb should: Yes, they should. They are does not correctly answer this question. Use the same modal verb from a should question when giving a direct answer.

× New things improve the people.

✓ Trying new things helps people grow.

The noun people is being used in a general sense, so it normally does not take the definite article the. Say helps people, not helps the people, when referring to people generally. Use the people only when referring to a specific group already identified.

× They feel they feel good.

✓ They feel good.

The phrase they feel is unnecessarily repeated, which creates an incorrect sentence structure. The correct structure is subject plus verb plus adjective: They feel good. Before speaking, briefly check for repeated words and remove any accidental repetition.