Opportunities— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答基本切题，但存在明显的时态、句式和重复问题。应使用过去时，例如将“am”改为“was”，将“take part”改为“took part”，将“play ping pong”改为“played table tennis”。同时，避免重复“take part in the play ping pong”，可以先直接回答，再补充活动的具体时间、原因或收获，并使用“because”或“after that”等连接词。

例: Yes, I had the opportunity to try table tennis when I was a child. I joined a class at school because I wanted to learn a new sport. I really enjoyed it, and it also helped me become more active.

提案: 回答观点明确，也使用了“not only...but also...”结构，内容基本有效。主要问题是“mind different things”表达错误，应改为“many different things”，而“Improve”不应大写；“improve their practical skills”比“improve the practical skills”更自然。为了进一步提高分数，可以加入一个具体例子或结果，并用“for example”展开说明。

例: Yes, I think people should try as many different things as possible. This can broaden their horizons and help them develop practical skills. For example, learning to cook or use basic tools can make people more independent in daily life.

× When I when I am a child, I take part in an activity like play ping pong then I take part in the play ping pong. I was very happy.

✓ When I was a child, I take part in an activity like play ping pong then I take part in the play ping pong. I was very happy.

题目询问的是童年时期的经历，因此应使用过去时。 “am”应改为“was”。

× When I when I am a child, I take part in an activity like play ping pong then I take part in the play ping pong. I was very happy.

✓ When I was a child, I took part in an activity like playing ping pong. I was very happy.

句子中“when I”重复，造成结构错误；同时两个分句连接不清晰。可以删除重复的“when I”，并将内容组织成完整、清楚的句子。

× When I when I am a child, I take part in an activity like play ping pong then I take part in the play ping pong. I was very happy.

✓ When I was a child, I took part in an activity like play ping pong then I took part in the play ping pong. I was very happy.

“take part”描述过去的童年经历，应改为过去式“took part”。同一个回答中相关动作的时态应保持一致。

× When I when I am a child, I take part in an activity like play ping pong then I take part in the play ping pong. I was very happy.

✓ When I when I am a child, I take part in an activity like playing ping pong then I take part in the play ping pong. I was very happy.

介词“like”后面表示活动时，通常使用动名词形式，因此“play”应改为“playing”。例如：“activities like swimming and playing ping pong”。

× When I when I am a child, I take part in an activity like play ping pong then I take part in the play ping pong. I was very happy.

✓ When I when I am a child, I take part in an activity like play ping pong then I take part in playing ping pong. I was very happy.

短语“take part in”中的“in”是介词，介词后应接名词或动名词。因此“play ping pong”应改为“playing ping pong”。

× Yes, people should try mind different things because they can not only broaden their horizons but also Improve the practical skills.

✓ Yes, people should try many different things because they can not only broaden their horizons but also Improve the practical skills.

“mind”不能表示“许多”。这里需要使用数量词“many”，因为“things”是可数名词复数。“many different things”表示“许多不同的事情”。

× Yes, people should try mind different things because they can not only broaden their horizons but also Improve the practical skills.

✓ Yes, people should try mind different things because they can not only broaden their horizons but also Improve practical skills.

“practical skills”在这里是泛指一般的实践技能，不是特定的技能，因此不需要使用定冠词“the”。