Opportunities— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答重复了考官的问题，而且把“take part in”误听成了“help her in”，没有直接回答自己童年时是否参加过新活动。建议先用“Yes, I did”或“No, I didn’t”明确回应，再补充具体活动、时间和感受。注意使用正确搭配，例如“take part in new activities”或“try new activities”。

例: Yes, I did. When I was in primary school, I tried activities like swimming and drawing. I especially enjoyed swimming because it was exciting and helped me stay healthy.

提案: 你的回答没有清楚表达“是否应该尝试不同事物”的观点，而且“There people”可能是误说或录音识别错误；“the main different things”也不自然。建议先直接回答“Yes, I think people should...”或“No, I don’t think they should...”，然后用“because”说明理由，并加入一个具体例子。

例: Yes, I think people should try different things, because this helps them discover their interests and develop new skills. For example, someone might try cooking or playing a musical instrument and find a new hobby.

× Did you have any opportunities to help her in new activities?

✓ Yes, I had opportunities to take part in new activities.

“her”没有明确的指代对象，而且原句中的“help her”改变了题目的原意。题目询问的是“参加新活动的机会”，因此应使用“take part in new activities”。回答问题时，也应使用陈述句，而不是重复使用疑问句结构。

× Three people try the main different things.

✓ People should try as many different things as they can.

题目使用了情态动词“should”，表示“应该”，回答时应保留这个含义，因此使用“People should try”。“Three people”表示“三个人”，不能表达题目中的一般性观点；这里应使用泛指的“People”。“as many different things as they can”表示“尽可能多的不同事情”，比“the main different things”更符合题意。