Opportunities— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你没有回答考官的问题，而是重复了问题本身，因此没有提供个人经历、细节或原因。回答时应先直接说明“有”或“没有”，然后补充具体活动、参加时间以及你的感受。建议使用“because”“for example”或“as a result”等连接词，并控制在2至4句话内。

例: Yes, I did. When I was about eight, I joined a swimming club because my parents wanted me to become more active. At first, I was nervous, but I gradually became more confident and really enjoyed it.

提案: 你重复了考官的问题，没有表达自己的观点，因此缺少直接回答、理由和具体例子。回答时应先明确表明赞成或部分赞成的立场，再解释尝试新事物的好处或限制，并提供一个具体例子。可以使用“however”“for instance”或“as long as”等连接词，使答案更自然、更有逻辑。

例: Yes, I think people should try a variety of activities, especially when they are young. For instance, learning a musical instrument or playing a new sport can help them discover their interests and develop useful skills. However, they should not take on so many activities that they feel overwhelmed.