Opportunities— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答基本切题，但存在明显的语法和搭配问题：应将过去时“have”改为“had”，将“opportunity”改为复数“opportunities”，并避免重复使用“many”。建议先直接回答“是”，然后补充一两个具体活动及其结果，使内容更丰富、更自然。

例: Yes, I had several opportunities to try new activities as a child. For example, I learned how to swim and joined a school drawing club. These experiences helped me become more confident and discover what I enjoyed doing.

提案: 回答表达了明确观点，但语序、词形和搭配错误较多。“more and more try more different new thing”重复且不自然；“new thing”应为“new things”；“become more clear”表达不准确，建议改为“understand their interests and strengths better”。可以使用“because”或“For example”连接理由和具体例子。

例: Yes, I think people should try a variety of activities whenever possible. By doing so, they can discover their interests and understand their strengths better. For example, trying a new sport or learning a musical instrument may reveal a talent they did not know they had.

× Yeah, I have many opportunity to participate in many new activities.

✓ Yeah, I had many opportunities to participate in many new activities.

问题中的问句使用了过去时“Did you have”，因此回答也应使用过去时。将“have”改为“had”。此外，“many”后面必须接可数名词的复数形式，所以“opportunity”应改为“opportunities”。

× I think people should more and more try more different new thing, then they can become more clear.

✓ I think people should try more different new things; then they can become clearer.

“more”表示数量增加，后面应接可数名词复数，因此“thing”应改为“things”。同时，情态动词“should”后面应直接接动词原形，所以将“should more and more try”调整为“should try”。“become clearer”比“become more clear”更自然地表达“变得更清楚”。