Opportunities— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答有直接回应问题，也提供了游泳和爬山等具体活动，但存在明显的语法和搭配问题：过去经历应使用过去时“took”，不能说“many exercise”，应改为“many physical activities”；“the afters class”表达不自然，可以说“after-school classes”。此外，句子过长，建议使用“such as”和“also”连接信息，并补充一个具体结果或感受，使回答更完整、自然。

例: Yes, I had several opportunities to try new activities as a child. My parents often took me swimming or climbing, and I also joined a few after-school classes. These activities helped me become more active and discover that I really enjoyed swimming.

提案: 回答表达了明确观点，但“In my opinion”和“I think”重复，可以保留一个。 “find out they prefer and interest”语法不正确，应改为“discover what they prefer and what interests them”或“find out what they are interested in”。建议先直接回答，再说明原因，并加入具体例子或结果，使观点更有说服力。

例: Yes, I think people should try a variety of activities, especially when they are young. By doing so, they can discover their interests and learn more about their strengths. For example, someone who tries both sports and music may find a talent or passion they did not know they had.

× Yes, when I was young, my parents often take me to many exercise, such as swimming or climbing and I often join the afters class.

✓ Yes, when I was young, my parents often took me to many exercises, such as swimming or climbing, and I often joined the after-school classes.

“when I was young”表示过去的时间，句子描述的是童年时期经常发生的事情，所以应该使用一般过去时。将“take”改为“took”，将“join”改为“joined”。建议看到“when I was young”或其他明确的过去时间表达时，注意使用动词过去式。

× Yes, when I was young, my parents often take me to many exercise, such as swimming or climbing and I often join the afters class.

✓ Yes, when I was young, my parents often took me to many exercises, such as swimming or climbing, and I often joined the after-school classes.

“many”后面必须接可数名词复数，因此“exercise”应改为“exercises”。同样，“classes”表示参加不同的课或多次课程，比单数“class”更合适。看到“many、several、different”等词时，要检查后面的可数名词是否使用复数形式。

× Yes, when I was young, my parents often take me to many exercise, such as swimming or climbing and I often join the afters class.

✓ Yes, when I was young, my parents often took me to many exercises, such as swimming or climbing, and I often joined the after-school classes.

“afters class”不是正确的英语表达。表示“课外的”应使用复合形容词“after-school”，并放在名词“classes”前面。建议记住固定表达“after-school classes”，其中“after-school”作为形容词修饰“classes”。

× In my opinion, I think it's very important because it helps people find out they prefer and interest.

✓ In my opinion, I think it's very important because it helps people find out what they prefer and what they are interested in.

“find out”后面需要一个完整、清楚的宾语从句；“find out they prefer and interest”结构不完整。“what they prefer”表示“他们喜欢什么”，而“what they are interested in”表示“他们对什么感兴趣”。建议使用“find out what + 主语 + 动词”的结构，并注意两个并列部分的结构保持一致。

× In my opinion, I think it's very important because it helps people find out they prefer and interest.

✓ In my opinion, I think it's very important because it helps people find out what they prefer and what they are interested in.

“be interested in”是固定搭配，表示“对……感兴趣”，不能只使用“interest”。因此应说“what they are interested in”。建议积累固定搭配，例如“be interested in something”和“show interest in something”，并注意介词“in”不能省略。