Opportunities— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接切题，结构清晰，也提供了具体活动作为例子。主要问题是时态不一致：前文使用过去时，最后应将“helps”改为“helped”，将“gain”和“make”改为“gain”和“make”或统一改成过去时“helped me gain confidence and make friends”。此外，可以使用更自然的表达，如“take part in a school club”，并说明这些活动带来的具体结果，使答案更加完整。

例: Yes, I did. When I was a child, my parents encouraged me to try new things, so I took part in several activities. For example, I had piano lessons, joined a swimming club, and participated in a school club. These experiences helped me become more confident and make new friends.

提案: 回答观点明确，但存在明显的语法和用词问题。“gain experience sees”应改为“gain experience”，“what their interest is”应改为“what they are interested in”或“what their interests are”。建议使用“because”或“which”连接理由，并加入一个具体例子或结果。答案目前只有一句话，内容略单薄；可以扩展到两到三句，但不要重复“try different things”。

例: Yes, I think people should try a variety of activities because this allows them to gain experience and discover what they are interested in. For instance, someone who tries different sports might find a passion for swimming. It can also help people develop useful skills and make new friends.

× For example, I took piano lessons and joined a swimming club, and I also participated in a school club, which helps me gain confidence and make friends.

✓ For example, I took piano lessons and joined a swimming club, and I also participated in a school club, which helped me gain confidence and make friends.

整句话描述的是童年时期发生的事情，主要时态是一般过去时。因此，关系从句中的动词也应使用过去式：helps 改为 helped。这样可以保持整句话的时态一致。