Opportunities— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer the question directly with a complete sentence. Avoid repeating “no” and do not combine “any opportunities” with “many new activities,” because the meaning is unclear. Add one specific example or reason to develop your answer, and use a linking word such as “because” or “for example.”

例: No, I didn’t have many opportunities to try new activities as a child because my parents were usually busy. For example, I mainly stayed at home and played with my friends in the neighborhood.

提案: Give a clear opinion in the first sentence and support it with a relevant reason or example. Several phrases are grammatically incorrect or unclear, such as “as many different things as they can be” and “remove opportunities.” Use accurate vocabulary related to trying new experiences, and connect your ideas with words such as “because,” “however,” or “for example.”

例: Yes, I think people should try different activities whenever possible because this helps them discover their interests and develop new skills. However, they should not feel pressured to do everything, especially if an activity is too expensive or unsafe.

× No, no, any opportunities and many new activities.

✓ No, I didn't have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child.

The original answer is a fragment because it does not contain a main verb. Use the past-tense verb phrase didn't have because the question asks about childhood. A complete answer should include a subject, a verb, and the relevant complement.

× Most people try as many different things as they can be.

✓ Most people try as many different things as they can.

The modal verb can is followed directly by the base form of a verb. The word be is unnecessary here because the intended meaning is that people try different things to the greatest extent possible.

× Also try to remove opportunities is a different view and many interviews.

✓ Some people also try to find opportunities to gain different experiences.

The original sentence has an unclear structure and does not form a logical, complete sentence. The phrase try to remove opportunities does not express the likely intended meaning, so use try to find opportunities. The correction also provides a clear subject and a logical verb structure.