Opportunities— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你没有直接回答问题，而是重复了考官的问题。应先明确回答“有”或“没有”，然后补充具体活动、时间和感受。建议使用“because”“for example”等连接词，使答案更完整；控制在2至4句话内。

例: Yes, I did. For example, I joined a swimming class when I was eight, and I really enjoyed learning new skills and making friends there.

提案: 你表达了明确观点，但重复了问题，而且答案过于简短，缺少原因和具体例子。可以先直接回答“Yes, I think they should”，再说明尝试新事物能够发现兴趣、积累经验或增强自信，并用“because”连接理由。

例: Yes, I think people should try a variety of activities because this helps them discover their interests and develop useful skills. For instance, someone who tries photography may discover a talent they never knew they had.

× Should people try as many different things as they can, yes they should.

✓ Yes, they should try as many different things as they can.

原句把疑问句和回答直接用逗号连接，句子结构不自然。回答问题时，应先用“Yes”直接回答，然后补充完整句子。可以使用“主语 + should + 动词原形”的结构，例如：“They should try...”