Opportunities— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答结构清晰，也直接回应了问题，但有一些语法和搭配错误：应该说“encouraged me to participate”，而不是“participates”；“sporting”在这里不自然，建议改为“sports”；“music lessons”前通常不需要“the”。此外，可以补充一个具体活动和相关结果，使答案更生动、更完整。

例: Yes, I had plenty of opportunities to try new activities when I was a child. My parents encouraged me to take part in sports and music lessons, so I played basketball and learned to play the piano. These activities helped me become more confident and discover what I enjoyed doing.

提案: 回答观点明确，并使用了“because”和“For example”来展开，逻辑较好。需要避免重复使用“discover”，并将“life is so long”改为更自然的表达，例如“life is full of possibilities”或“you have many opportunities to explore”。还可以加入一个具体例子或结果，让内容更加具体。

例: Definitely. I think people should try different things because life is full of possibilities, and they may discover talents they never knew they had. For instance, someone who tries volunteering might find that they are good at communicating with others and decide to pursue a career in a people-oriented field.

× Yes, I had a lot of opportunities to participate in new activities when I was a child. My parents encouraged me to participates in different outside activities like sporting, the music lessons.

✓ Yes, I had a lot of opportunities to participate in new activities when I was a child. My parents encouraged me to participate in different activities like sports and music lessons.

在“encourage + 人 + to do”结构中，to 后面必须接动词原形，因此“to participates”应改为“to participate”。“participates”是第三人称单数形式，不能用于这里。

× Yes, I had a lot of opportunities to participate in new activities when I was a child. My parents encouraged me to participates in different outside activities like sporting, the music lessons.

✓ Yes, I had a lot of opportunities to participate in new activities when I was a child. My parents encouraged me to participate in different activities like sports and music lessons.

“sporting”通常是形容词或现在分词，不能在这里作为与“music lessons”并列的活动名称。表示体育活动时，应使用复数名词“sports”。同时，“music lessons”表示一般性的音乐课，使用复数形式更自然。

× Yes, I had a lot of opportunities to participate in new activities when I was a child. My parents encouraged me to participates in different outside activities like sporting, the music lessons.

✓ Yes, I had a lot of opportunities to participate in new activities when I was a child. My parents encouraged me to participate in different activities like sports and music lessons.

“the”用于特指某些具体的音乐课。这里是在泛指音乐课这一类活动，因此不需要使用定冠词“the”，应改为“music lessons”。

× Definitely. People should try as many different things as they can because life is so long and you never know what you are capable of. For example, trying different hobbies or jobs can help you discover discover new talents and interests.

✓ Definitely. People should try as many different things as they can because life is so long and you never know what you are capable of. For example, trying different hobbies or jobs can help you discover new talents and interests.

“discover”在句中重复出现了一次，造成句子结构不正确。删除重复的“discover”后，句子结构和意思都更清楚。