Opportunities— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is very brief and does not follow the Basic Structure guideline. Provide a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details (specific examples, when/where, how often, or what you learned). Use a linking word to expand coherently. Aim for 2–4 sentences and include specific content to show vocabulary and fluency.

例: Yes, absolutely — I tried several new activities as a child. For example, I took weekly swimming lessons from age seven and joined a school drama club in primary school, which helped me become more confident speaking in public.

提案: This answer is too short and lacks explanation and reasoning. Start with a clear opinion sentence, then give reasons and an example or result, using linking words (for example, because, therefore, furthermore). Be specific about benefits and avoid repetition.

例: Yes, absolutely — I think people should try many different things because it helps them discover interests and skills they might not expect. For instance, trying a foreign language or a new sport can improve communication and fitness, and sometimes leads to lifelong hobbies or career choices.

× Yes, absolutely.

✓ Yes, absolutely.

The response is a short, grammatically correct affirmation appropriate for a spoken exam. It contains no errors listed in the provided Grammar_Problem_Type_List. Keep the brief reply or expand for detail if required (e.g., 'Yes, absolutely. I had the chance to try different activities like...').

× Yes, absolutely.

✓ Yes, absolutely.

This short answer correctly responds to the question using an appropriate modal 'should' context; the student affirms with a concise, correct phrase. There are no issues from the provided list. If a fuller answer is needed, add a supporting reason or example (e.g., 'Yes, absolutely. People should try many things to discover their interests and strengths.').