Opportunities— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is very short and doesn't directly address the question. It also asks the examiner a question back, which is inappropriate in this context. To improve, respond with a clear topic sentence about your experience, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words (for example, where or what activities, when, and why they mattered). Keep it natural and within 3–4 sentences.

例: Yes, I had several opportunities to try new activities as a child. For example, I joined a local art club and a weekend soccer team, which helped me develop creativity and teamwork. Because my parents encouraged me to explore different hobbies, I learned which activities I enjoyed most.

提案: The reply is too brief and does not justify the opinion. Improve by giving a clear topic sentence stating your view, then support it with specific reasons or an example, linked with words like because, for instance, or therefore. Aim for 2–4 sentences and include relevant vocabulary (e.g., benefits, broaden horizons, skills).

例: Yes, absolutely, people should try a variety of activities because it broadens their horizons and builds useful skills. For instance, trying sports can improve fitness and teamwork, while learning an instrument can boost concentration and discipline. Therefore, experimenting with different things helps people discover their passions and strengths.

× Yes, I have. How about you?

✓ Yes, I did. How about you?

The examiner asked about opportunities in the past ('as a child'), so the response should use past tense. The original answer 'Yes, I have.' uses present perfect, which mismatches the time frame. Use simple past 'Yes, I did.' to agree with the past reference. Suggestion: match the tense of short answers to the question's time reference (use 'did' for past).

× Yes, absolutely.

✓ Yes, absolutely.

This short answer is grammatically acceptable as a response to 'Should people try as many different things as they can?' No correction is needed. It appropriately affirms the modal question using 'should'. The sentence is fine as is; keep using brief affirmative responses like 'Yes, absolutely' for clarity and naturalness.