Opportunities— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a direct short answer but expand with 2–3 supporting details (one or two sentences) using linking words. Mention specific activities, when or where they happened, and one brief reason or memory to make the response natural and informative. Keep total length under five sentences.

例: Yes, I did. For example, when I was at primary school I joined the drama club and took piano lessons on weekends. As a result, I became more confident speaking in public and developed an interest in music.

提案: Start with a clear opinion then add 2–3 specific reasons or examples using linking words like “because” or “for example.” Explain one concrete benefit to make your answer convincing and natural, keeping within five sentences.

例: Yes, absolutely, because trying different things helps you discover new interests and skills. For example, volunteering abroad taught me teamwork and improved my language skills, so I would recommend being open to new experiences.

× Yes.

✓ Yes, I did.

The student response 'Yes.' is grammatically acceptable as a short answer in conversation, but given the examiner's past-tense question 'Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?' a full grammatically explicit reply should include the auxiliary verb and subject to match the tense: 'Yes, I did.' This clarifies the subject and uses the correct past-tense auxiliary. Suggestion: respond with 'Yes, I did.' or expand with details like 'Yes, I did. I tried swimming and music classes.'

× Yes, absolutely.

✓ Yes, absolutely they should.

The examiner asked a general present-tense question: 'Should people try as many different things as they can?' The student's 'Yes, absolutely.' is natural in conversation, but to explicitly address the modal verb 'should' and match the sentence structure, include the modal and subject: 'Yes, absolutely they should.' This makes the response clearer and grammatically complete. Suggestion: reply 'Yes, absolutely they should.' or expand with reasoning like 'Yes, absolutely they should, because trying new things helps personal growth.'