Opportunities— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更有条理并注意时态与语法。可以先给出主题句回答问题，然后用1–2个具体细节支持，例如具体活动名称、频率或你最喜欢的原因。避免句子过长或不完整，使用连接词如“and”/“because”/“so”来保持连贯。发音上注意单词首字母大小写无关，但口语中要清晰说出如“badminton”“football”。

例: Yes. My parents encouraged me to try many sports when I was a child. For example, I played badminton and football almost every weekend, and I became a big fan of football because I enjoyed the teamwork and excitement of matches.

提案: 回答要更精确、自然并注意词汇搭配错误。先给直接观点，然后用一到两个具体理由支持，避免字词搭配错误（如“burden our horizons”不正确，应为“broaden our horizons”）。说明如何改善身心或举例会更有说服力。

例: Yes, I think people should try new things because it broadens their horizons and improves physical and mental health. For instance, learning a new sport can increase fitness and confidence, while trying a musical instrument can reduce stress and boost creativity.

× Yes, I do have so when I was a child my parents gave me a lot of opportunity to do some sports like the Badminton and the football and I was quite a big fan of football I think.

✓ Yes, I did when I was a child. My parents gave me a lot of opportunities to do sports like badminton and football, and I was quite a big fan of football, I think.

句子中时态与语境不一致。回答过去经历时应使用过去时，不能用现在时的 'do have'。此外，名词复数（opportunity → opportunities）和不需要定冠词（the Badminton/the football → badminton/football），以及句子应分成更清晰的几个部分。建议：将动词改为过去时（do have → did / have → had），把可数名词改为复数或加冠词，并移除不必要的定冠词，必要时用句号或逗号分隔从句以提高可读性。

× And my close friend which we usually hang out together and we do so many stuff like

✓ And my close friend, whom I usually hung out with, and we did so many things like ...

句子中代词使用不当。关系代词 'which' 用于物，而指人时应使用 'who' 或在宾格用 'whom'。此外时态应与叙述过去一致（usually hang out → usually hung out / do → did），'stuff' 更口语，正式改为 'things'。建议：指人用 who/whom，根据在句中作主格或宾格选择；保持时态一致；用更合适的名词（things）。

× Yes, I really encourage people to try new things, the new stuff which not only burden our horizons but also can improve our body function, our muscle, our organs healthy.

✓ Yes, I really encourage people to try new things. New experiences not only broaden our horizons but also can improve our bodily functions, muscles and organ health.

句子中词语或搭配不当影响语法表达。'burden our horizons' 搭配错误，应为 'broaden our horizons'。'our body function, our muscle, our organs healthy' 结构混乱，需用名词复数和适当的搭配（bodily functions, muscles, organ health 或 make our organs healthier）。另外句子需要用句号分开两部分以清晰表达。建议：使用正确搭配（broaden horizons），把名词改为复数或用形容词形式表达健康（make ... healthier / improve ... health），并注意断句。