Opportunities— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 句子要更自然并且结構更清晰。注意時態一致（既然說過去經驗，應用過去完成或過去式），避免重複信息（例如每週一次與每週兩次矛盾）。可以在第一句直接回答問題，然後用1–2句具體細節說明活動內容、持續時間與感受，並用連接詞使邏輯更順暢。

例: Yes. I joined a boarding club when I was ten and used to attend regularly. Now I still play every weekend, usually twice a week, and it has become my favourite sport because it helped me make friends and improve my fitness.

提案: 回答要合併成完整句子，避免用太多簡短重複句。提供具體理由和一兩個例子，用連接詞（e.g., because, for example, such as）連接觀點與支持句，並儘量控制在3–4句內。

例: Yes, I believe people should try different activities because new experiences can broaden their perspectives and help them discover interests. For example, learning a musical instrument or volunteering can build confidence and teach useful skills.

× I took part in the boarding club when I was ten years old and now I'm playing it every weekend.

✓ I took part in the boarding club when I was ten years old and now I play in it every weekend.

句子混用了过去时（took）和现在进行时（I'm playing），但描述的是现在的经常性活动，应该用一般现在时。将 "I'm playing it every weekend" 改为 "I play in it every weekend"（或更自然的 "I play in the club every weekend"），表示习惯性的动作。注意动词搭配：play in a club 或 play for a team。

× I play it twice a week.

✓ I play it twice a week.

原句有潜在的搭配问题而非单复数错误。若指的是运动或活动，通常说 "I play twice a week" 或 "I do it twice a week"，不需要在 play 后加宾语 "it"。但按单复数列表，此处无需改为复数，保持不变。

× It has become my favourite sports.

✓ It has become my favourite sport.

"sport" 为可数名词，表示单一项目时应使用单数形式。原句中使用复数 "sports" 与单数指代 "it"（指某一项活动）不一致。将 "sports" 改为单数 "sport" 以保持一致性。

× Yes, I think people should try many different things. Because I think different things can change their minds and thoughts. I think it is important.

✓ Yes, I think people should try many different things because new experiences can change their minds and are important.

原回答由多个短句以句号断开导致结构松散且有重复（多次使用 I think）。第二句以连词 Because 起首形成碎片句，英文中不宜单独作为句子。将句子合并并精简表达可避免片段句和冗余。建议合并为一到两句，并减少重复的短语，例如用 "because new experiences can change their minds and are important"。