Opportunities— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response simply repeated the examiner's question and did not answer. To improve, always respond directly with a topic sentence that answers the question, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep answers natural, concise (no more than 5 sentences), and use relevant vocabulary. For example, specify types of activities, where or with whom you tried them, and how they affected you.

例: Yes, I had several opportunities to try new activities as a child. For instance, I joined my school’s drama club and a weekend soccer team, which helped me become more confident and make friends. Also, my parents enrolled me in piano lessons, so I learned discipline and enjoyed performing at small recitals. These varied experiences shaped my interests and social skills.

提案: Again, you repeated the question instead of giving an opinion. To improve, state a clear stance in the first sentence, then support it with reasons and an example using linking words (for example, ‘because’, ‘for instance’, ‘however’). Use specific, relevant vocabulary and keep the response focused and natural.

例: Yes, I believe people should try as many different things as possible because it broadens their perspective and helps them discover new passions. For example, trying different hobbies like cooking or hiking can reveal hidden talents and improve wellbeing. However, it is also important to balance variety with depth so you can develop real skills in areas that interest you.

× Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child

✓ Yes, I did have opportunities to take part in new activities as a child.

The student repeated the examiner's question without answering. This is a sentence structure issue (ID 26) because the response lacks a verb phrase expressing a stance or action. Provide a full sentence that directly answers the question using the appropriate past tense ('did') to match the time frame 'as a child' and include brief details if possible. Suggestion: Start with 'Yes, I did' or 'No, I didn't' and follow with a short example (e.g., 'Yes, I did; I tried swimming and painting').

× Should people try as many different things as they can?

✓ Yes, I believe people should try as many different things as they can.

The student again repeated the examiner's question instead of giving an answer. This is a sentence structure issue (ID 26) because the reply must be a statement expressing opinion. Use a modal verb 'should' correctly in a declarative sentence and add a personal stance phrase ('I believe') to make it a proper answer. Suggestion: Reply with 'Yes, I think so' or 'No, not necessarily' and briefly justify your opinion (e.g., 'Yes, I believe people should because it helps them discover their interests').