Opportunities— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời hiện tại không liên quan đến câu hỏi, thiếu nội dung, cấu trúc và từ vựng phù hợp. Để cải thiện, hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề ngắn nêu rõ có hay không, sau đó thêm 1–2 câu chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ loại hoạt động, tần suất, cảm nhận). Sử dụng liên từ khi cần để làm câu trả lời mạch lạc và tự nhiên. Giữ tổng số câu không quá 5.

例: Yes, I did. I often joined my school's music club and occasional sports events when I was a child, which helped me develop confidence and teamwork skills. For instance, I attended weekly choir practices for two years and took part in several small concerts, so I became more comfortable performing in front of people.

提案: Câu trả lời hiện tại là phản câu hỏi và không trả lời trực tiếp; thiếu luận điểm và ví dụ. Để cải thiện, hãy nêu quan điểm rõ ràng trong một câu chủ đề (đồng ý hoặc không), rồi thêm 1–2 câu hỗ trợ với lý do và một ví dụ ngắn. Sử dụng liên từ (for example, because, therefore) để làm rõ mối liên hệ giữa ý chính và chi tiết hỗ trợ.

例: I think people should try a variety of activities because it helps them discover new interests and skills. For example, by experimenting with painting and hiking, someone might realize they enjoy outdoor photography, which could lead to a long-term hobby or even a career path.

× What's up, gang?

✓ I used to play with other children and try new activities when I was a child.

The student's reply 'What's up, gang?' is informal and does not answer the examiner's question; this is a sentence structure/content error because the response fails to provide the required information. Suggested correction provides a grammatically complete, relevant answer in past tense ('used to' for habitual past) that matches the prompt about childhood activities. Improvement: answer the question directly, use past tense for childhood habits (e.g., 'I used to...'), and avoid irrelevant greetings. Note: only sentences that meet the provided grammar problem types were corrected; this item is classified as type 26 because the original sentence lacks an appropriate structure to answer the question.

× I don't know, how about you?

✓ Yes, I think people should try as many different things as they can.

The student's reply 'I don't know, how about you?' does not answer the examiner's question and is therefore a sentence structure/content error. The suggested correction gives a clear opinion in the present modal form 'should' which is appropriate for a general recommendation question. Improvement: respond directly to the question with a clear stance and use the correct modal verb 'should' to express advice or recommendation.