Opportunities— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. To improve, respond directly with a clear topic sentence about your childhood experiences, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep answers natural, concise (max 5 sentences), and avoid repeating the question.

例: Yes, I had several opportunities to try new activities as a child. For example, my school offered music and pottery clubs, so I learned to play the recorder and make small clay pots. Also, my parents encouraged sports, so I joined a local football team which helped me build confidence and teamwork skills.

提案: The student attempted to restate the question but made grammatical errors and did not provide an opinion. Improve by giving a direct opinion (topic sentence), then justify it with specific reasons and linking words. Correct grammar and use appropriate vocabulary (e.g., 'choose' instead of 'choice'). Keep it natural and within 1–4 supporting sentences.

例: Yes, I think people should try as many different things as possible because it helps them discover interests and develop new skills. For instance, trying different hobbies or jobs can reveal hidden talents, and as a result, people become more adaptable in their careers and personal lives.

× Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?

✓ Yes, I had opportunities to take part in new activities as a child.

The student's response repeated the examiner's question rather than answering it. This is a sentence structure issue (ID 26). The correction provides a proper past-tense answer that matches the question. Suggestion: answer the question directly using past tense (had) and include brief examples if possible.

× Should people choice as many different things as as they can?

✓ Should people try as many different things as they can?

The student used the noun 'choice' instead of the verb 'try' and duplicated 'as'. This is a sentence structure/word choice error (ID 26). The correct verb for this context is 'try' and only one 'as' is needed in the phrase 'as they can'. Suggestion: use the appropriate verb (try) and remove the extra 'as'; keep the modal 'should' and base verb form 'try'.