Opportunities— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?
受験者
Yes, definitely. I had various opportunities to join new activities when I was young, especially at school. I had the chance to join sports teams and other extracurricular activities. Even though I didn't took that opportunities much, I believe they helped me to. Improve my teamwork and. Communication skills a lot.
試験官
Should people try as many different things as they can?
受験者
Yes, absolutely. I believe it's really important to try different the new things as it gives them an opportunity to learn different skills and identify their talents and capabilities. So I believe everyone should think out-of-the-box. And try different things by their own that will help them to make strong relationships with other.
評価
総合
Part 1
Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?
スコア: 72.0提案: Improve grammar (past tense and articles), remove filler and fragmented sentences, and make the response more coherent and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two linked specific supporting details using linking words (e.g. "for example", "also") and finish with a short result. Avoid sentence fragments and correct verb forms ("didn't take" not "didn't took").
例: Yes. I had many chances to try new activities at school. For example, I joined a football team and a debating club, and these helped me learn teamwork and public speaking. As a result, I became more confident when working with others.
Should people try as many different things as they can?
スコア: 70.0提案: Correct word order and article usage, avoid repetition, and link ideas clearly. Provide a direct opinion sentence then support it with specific reasons and an example. Use linking words like "because", "for example", or "so" to make the response coherent and limit to no more than five sentences.
例: Yes, I think people should try many different activities because it helps them discover their strengths and learn new skills. For example, joining a volunteer group can teach communication and organization skills. Therefore, trying new things can also help build friendships and confidence.
文法
× Even though I didn't took that opportunities much, I believe they helped me to.
✓ Even though I didn't take those opportunities much, I believe they helped me to improve my teamwork and communication skills a lot.
The sentence uses 'didn't' which requires the base form of the verb, so 'took' should be 'take' (past negative uses did + base verb). Also 'that opportunities' is incorrect plural demonstrative and should be 'those opportunities'. The fragment 'to.' breaks the sentence; it should continue with the verb 'improve' and the phrase 'teamwork and communication skills' combined. Suggestion: use 'didn't take', 'those opportunities', and complete the infinitive 'to improve' followed by the object.'},{
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