Opportunities— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời hiện tại không rõ nghĩa do phát âm và cấu trúc sai nhiều. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề ngắn, sau đó thêm 1-2 câu chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ hoạt động nào, khi nào, với ai, cảm giác thế nào). Sử dụng từ ngữ đơn giản, ngữ pháp cơ bản đúng và tránh từ không liên quan.

例: Yes. I joined a school drama club when I was ten. I practiced with classmates twice a week and performed in a play, which helped me become more confident speaking in public.

提案: Câu trả lời quá ngắn và nhiều lỗi từ vựng ("risk warranty" không phù hợp). Nên bắt đầu bằng một câu nêu quan điểm rõ ràng, rồi giải thích lý do và đưa ví dụ cụ thể. Dùng liên từ (because, for example, so) để mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I think people should try many different things because it helps them learn new skills and discover interests. For example, trying different sports or hobbies can reveal talents and build confidence.

× Did you hear any purple ladies to taste part in new activity as night achieved?

✓ Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities when you were a child?

The original sentence has multiple structural and word-choice errors: 'hear any purple ladies' is meaningless here, 'to taste part' is incorrect phrase for 'take part', 'new activity' should be plural 'new activities', and 'as night achieved' is nonsensical; the examiner's question asks about childhood opportunities so use 'when you were a child'. Suggestion: use clear subject-verb-object order, choose appropriate verbs and nouns ('have opportunities', 'take part in'), and match tense and time expression ('when you were a child').

× Sure, people try as many risk warranty as they can.

✓ Sure, people should try as many different things as they can.

The original response uses incorrect words: 'risk warranty' is not a valid phrase and does not match the examiner's question. Also the modal meaning is better expressed with 'should' to answer 'Should people try...?' Suggestion: use 'should' for advice and 'different things' to convey variety; keep simple present tense for general statements.