Opportunities— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答应更符合时态和句子结构，避免冗余并补充具体细节。你现在的句子存在时态错误（“have”应为过去式）、口语填充词（uh）较多，且句子未完整表达结论。建议使用一到两句的主题句再加一到两句具体说明，比如说明参加舞蹈课学到的技能或其它活动，以及这些活动怎样影响你。注意连接词的使用让句子更连贯。

例: Yes. I had several opportunities to try new activities when I was a child. For example, I attended dance classes where I learned coordination and rhythm, and I also joined a local drama club, which helped me become more confident speaking in front of people.

提案: 回答要更清晰、有逻辑并使用恰当的表达。句子中有语法和表达问题（例如“when you do something that you can know”不通顺，短语“expand your eyes and talk”不地道）。建议先给出直接立场句，再用一到两句理由或例子支撑，使用自然的词汇如“broaden your horizons”或“gain new skills”，并用连接词如“because”或“for example”。

例: Yes, I believe people should try many different things. Trying new activities can broaden your horizons and help you discover hidden talents; for example, learning a new sport taught me teamwork and improved my fitness.

× Yeah, when I was a child, I have many opportunities, uh, for example, I go to dance class and learn many, a lot of skills and have very.

✓ Yeah, when I was a child, I had many opportunities. For example, I went to dance class, learned a lot of skills and had a very good time.

问题类型：现在时/过去时使用错误（应使用过去时）。说明：原句中说“when I was a child”已表明时间在过去，但使用了现在时态“have”“go”“learn”“have”，时态不一致。建议：把动词改为过去式以保持时态一致：have→had，go→went，learn→learned；并把句子分成两句使表达更清晰，补全“very”后的名词（如“very good time”）。

× For me, it's yes. I think you can try many different things because when you do something that you can know, you can expand your eyes and talk.

✓ For me, it's yes. I think you can try many different things because when you do something, you can learn about it and broaden your horizons and communication skills.

问题类型：现在时/词语搭配不当（主要为时态与表达错误）。说明：原句“when you do something that you can know”词序和表达错误，且“expand your eyes and talk”是字面翻译，不符合英语习惯。建议：简化为“When you do something, you can learn about it”或“When you try something new, you learn from it”，并用习惯表达“broaden your horizons”表示开阔视野，或“improve your communication skills”表示提高交流能力。