Opportunities— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 用更直接的主题句开头并简化表达，避免重复；增加具体细节来支持观点并使用连接词使句子更连贯。例如说明害羞的具体情境、一次具体的活动或改变的例子。注意时态和主谓一致。

例: Not really — I was very shy as a child, so I usually avoided new activities. For example, I declined to join the school drama club because I felt embarrassed speaking in front of strangers. Instead, I preferred quiet activities with a couple of close friends, like drawing or reading. Over time, small successes in class helped me become a bit more confident.

提案: 注意用词准确，避免错把单词（如“anime”）写错或用错；给出更具体的原因和举例并用连接词扩展观点。开头用一个明确的主题句，然后用一到两句具体理由和例子支持。

例: Yes, I believe people should try as many different things as possible. Trying new activities can broaden your interests and help you discover hidden talents; for instance, taking a cooking class might reveal a love of baking. Moreover, succeeding at a new task can boost self-confidence, encouraging you to try even more challenges.

× Yes, people should try anime as many different things as they can. I think one reason is that that it can make them feel good about themselves.

✓ Yes, people should try as many different things as they can. I think one reason is that it can make them feel good about themselves.

错误类型在给定列表中没有精确匹配（最接近的是26 句子结构错误或13 形容词/副词使用，但问题为多余词/错误词序）。原句中“try anime as many different things”包含多余或错误单词“anime”，且出现重复词“that that”。应删除“anime”和一个“that”。建议：读句子时注意不要把无关词插入，检查是否有重复单词。