Opportunities— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?
受験者
Yes, when I was in primary school I was good at running and I won a couple of medals in athletics so one of my PE teachers noticed me and asked me to join the school sports team. It really improved my technique and made me more confident in competitions.
試験官
Should people try as many different things as they can?
受験者
Yes, definitely. It's worth trying new things because you might cover a new passion or learn useful skills. And even if it doesn't work out, the worst thing is to say no. In my view, rejection can be a redirection that leads you to better opportunities.
評価
総合
Part 1
Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?
スコア: 82.0提案: 回答总体自然，内容相关且信息具体（获奖、被老师选中、技能提升与自信），但句子较长且略显重复，应使用更清晰的主题句并用1–2个短句补充细节，避免冗余，同时加入连接词让逻辑更流畅。可改进发音节奏与停顿以突出重点。
例: Yes. In primary school I was good at running and won a couple of medals, so my PE teacher invited me to join the school sports team. Joining the team improved my running technique and gave me more confidence in competitions.
Should people try as many different things as they can?
スコア: 86.0提案: 回答简洁有力，观点明确并带有原因和个人看法，使用了比喻性表达（rejection can be a redirection）。改进点：注意用词精准（“cover a new passion”不太地道，应用discover/find），并用连接词更好地衔接想法，可加入一个具体例子以增强说服力。保持句子长度在5句以内。
例: Yes, definitely. People should try new things because they can discover new passions or learn useful skills. Even if something doesn't work out, saying yes gives you experience, and sometimes failure leads you to better opportunities. For example, I tried painting once and discovered a new hobby that relaxed me.
文法
× It really improved my technique and made me more confident in competitions.
✓ It really improved my technique and made me more confident in competitions.
句子本身没有反身代词错误。此处“my”用法正确，“made me”也正确，因此无需改动。
× Yes, definitely. It's worth trying new things because you might cover a new passion or learn useful skills.
✓ Yes, definitely. It's worth trying new things because you might discover a new passion or learn useful skills.
原句中的“cover a new passion”搭配不自然，常用表达是“discover a passion”（发现一个兴趣/热情）。这是句子结构和词汇搭配问题，属句子结构错误（26）。建议将“cover”改为“discover”以符合习惯用法。
× And even if it doesn't work out, the worst thing is to say no.
✓ And even if it doesn't work out, the worst thing is saying no.
原句用不定式“to say no”并非错误，但在此上下文中，名词化动名词“saying no”更自然，用作表语更贴近口语表达。将不定式改为动名词是更地道的时态/形式选择，故归为现在时/形式问题（6）。
× Yes, when I was in primary school I was good at running and I won a couple of medals in athletics so one of my PE teachers noticed me and asked me to join the school sports team.
✓ Yes, when I was in primary school I was good at running and I won a couple of medals in athletics, so one of my PE teachers noticed me and asked me to join the school sports team.
原句语法正确，但缺少逗号使句子连接处阅读上略显生硬。把“athletics”后面加逗号更清晰。时态使用为过去时，动词形式正确，因此只是句子结构上需要标点改进，归类为过去时相关（5）。
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