Tiredness— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly, then give one clear reason or detail. “Always” is very absolute, and “I have love left” is unclear in this context; use a phrase such as “I don’t have much energy” if that is what you mean.

例: Yes, I often feel tired, especially in the morning. I think it’s because I don’t always get enough sleep.

提案: Complete your sentence by saying when you feel tired and, if possible, add a specific circumstance. Avoid using both “every time” and “always,” as they repeat the same idea.

例: I usually feel tired when I wake up, particularly if I’ve gone to bed late the night before.

提案: Use clear verbs and describe one or two activities you actually do. The phrase “house, purse” is difficult to understand, so try saying “do some housework,” “take a nap,” or another activity that matches your meaning.

例: When I feel tired, I usually take a short nap or do some light housework. A little rest helps me feel more energetic.

提案: Your answer is direct, but use the present tense to match the general question. Say “stay at home” rather than “stayed home in home,” and add a brief reason or detail.

例: No, I usually stay at home when I’m tired. I’d rather get some rest than go out with my friends.

× I do something like house, purse and sleeping.

✓ I do things like cleaning the house, carrying my purse, and sleeping.

The examples in the original list are not parallel: house and purse are nouns, while sleeping is a gerund. Use the same grammatical form for each example, such as gerunds. Make sure the examples also clearly describe activities.

× No, I stayed home in home to sleep.

✓ No, I stay at home to sleep.

The question asks about what you do when you feel tired in general, so use the present tense, stay, rather than the past tense, stayed.

× No, I stayed home in home to sleep.

✓ No, I stay at home to sleep.

Use at home to describe being in your home. In home is not the appropriate prepositional phrase in this context.