Tiredness— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接，但内容过于简短，缺少原因或具体情况。可以先明确回答，再补充疲劳出现的频率、原因或结果，并使用 because 或 especially 等连接和补充信息。

例: Yes, I often feel tired, especially after a busy day at work. I usually feel this way because I have to concentrate for several hours. However, I normally feel better after getting some rest.

提案: 句子存在明显语法问题：应使用“feel tired”而不是“tired”，并说“work for a long time”或“work long hours”。回答还需要更具体地说明什么时候感到疲劳，例如连续工作几小时后，并补充原因或结果。

例: I usually feel tired when I work for a long time without taking a break. For example, after working continuously for four or five hours, I find it difficult to concentrate. That is when I normally need to rest for a while.

提案: 回答不完整，缺少主语和谓语。应使用“I make...”或“I usually...”来直接回答，并说明制作什么饮料以及这样做的效果。

例: When I feel tired, I usually make a cup of coffee or tea. I drink it while taking a short break. This helps me relax and regain my energy.

提案: 虽然回答了问题，但只有一个词，缺少解释。可以先回答“Yes, I do”或“No, I don’t”，然后说明原因、具体情况或例外，并使用 because、although 或 unless 连接信息。

例: Yes, I still go out with my friends if I have already made plans. Spending time with them helps me relax, even when I feel tired. However, I usually choose a quiet place instead of going somewhere crowded.

× When I tired for work a long time.

✓ When I get tired from working for a long time.

原句缺少谓语动词，不能直接说“When I tired”。这里需要使用“get tired”表示“变得疲惫”。另外，“work”在“from”后面表示持续进行的活动时，应使用动名词“working”。

× When I tired for work a long time.

✓ When I get tired from working for a long time.

“tired for work”中的介词使用错误。表示“因为长时间工作而感到疲惫”时，应使用“tired from working”，而不是“tired for work”。

× When I tired for work a long time.

✓ When I get tired from working for a long time.

介词“from”后面通常接名词或动名词，因此“work”应改为“working”。“working for a long time”表示“长时间工作”。

× Make drink

✓ I make a drink.

原句缺少主语，句子结构不完整。英语完整句通常需要主语和谓语，因此应添加主语“I”。

× Make drink

✓ I make a drink.

“drink”在这里是可数名词，表示“一杯饮料”，前面需要使用不定冠词“a”。