Tiredness— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly in the first sentence, then explain your routine with a linking word such as “because.” The phrase “abn work” is unclear and should be corrected, perhaps to “an office job” or “a nine-to-five job.” Add one specific result, such as feeling tired in the evening. Keep the answer natural and within two or three sentences.

例: Yes, I often feel tired because I have a demanding office job. I work from nine to five, Monday to Friday, so I usually feel exhausted by the end of the day.

提案: The answer is relevant, but “the long work hours of Monday to Friday” is unnatural. Say “after a long day at work” or “at the end of the workweek.” Give a more specific time and, if possible, explain why you feel tired then.

例: I usually feel tired at the end of a long workday, especially on Friday evening. By then, I have spent five full days working, so I have very little energy left.

提案: This is a clear and natural answer, but it could be slightly more developed with a linking word and a specific routine. Explain what you do immediately after arriving home and why it helps you recover. Avoid using “just” if it does not add meaning.

例: When I feel exhausted, I usually go straight to bed after I get home. Sometimes I take a quick shower first because it helps me relax and fall asleep more easily.

提案: Your answer gives a clear “No,” but “spend my time getting home” is not natural. Say “go straight home” or “stay at home.” Add a specific reason or contrast, such as meeting friends on weekends when you have more energy.

例: No, I usually go straight home when I feel tired so that I can recover quickly. I prefer to rest on weekdays and meet my friends at the weekend, when I have more energy.

× Yes, mainly because I do a lot of work. My schedule is Monday to Friday nine AM to five PM and I mostly do abn work.

✓ Yes, mainly because I do a lot of work. My schedule is from Monday to Friday, from nine AM to five PM, and I mostly do abn work.

The preposition from is needed to introduce the beginning of a time period. Use from ... to ... when describing a schedule or working hours. The word abn appears to be a spelling or typing error, but it is not corrected because it does not match any grammar problem type in the provided list.

× I usually feel tired after the long work hours of Monday to Friday.

✓ I usually feel tired after my long work hours from Monday to Friday.

The preposition from is more appropriate than of when referring to a period that extends across specific days. The phrase my long work hours is also more natural because the speaker is referring to their own working hours.

× No, I usually just spend my time getting home so that I can recover quickly.

✓ No, I usually just spend my time at home so that I can recover quickly.

The preposition at is needed in the phrase at home. Spend my time getting home means using time to travel home, whereas the intended meaning is probably staying at home and recovering.