Tiredness— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更自然並結構清晰。開頭直接回答問題，接著用一到兩句補充，避免冗長重複。注意動詞形式（keep my body healthy），並用連接詞使語句流暢。可補充具體休息和運動方式。

例: Yes, I do sometimes. If I feel tired I usually rest for a while and then do some light exercise, such as a short walk or stretching, which helps me feel refreshed.

提案: 回答要更直接且語法正確。避免重複（"finish finish"），使用一個主句並加上具體原因或情境細節來豐富內容。可說明工作性質或時間段，例如下午或下班後。

例: I usually feel tired after a long day at work, especially in the late afternoon when I’ve been doing physically demanding or mentally stressful tasks.

提案: 回答要有條理並使用連接詞，修正用詞（"eat something to get energy"，"exercise to stay healthy"）。可以給出具體例子和時間順序，句子控制在三到四句內。

例: I usually take a short rest and have a light snack to regain energy. Then I might do some gentle exercise, like a 20-minute walk or stretching, to stay healthy and feel more awake.

× Yes, but when I feel tired I will rest and then I will exercise to keep my body health and then I will not feel tired.

✓ Yes, but when I feel tired I rest and then I exercise to keep my body healthy and then I don't feel tired.

本句主要使用一般现在时表示经常发生的习惯动作，所以不应反复使用将来时的 will。将 keep my body health 改为 keep my body healthy，因为需要形容词 healthy 来描述“身体”的状态，而不是名词 health。建议：谈论习惯或经常性动作时使用一般现在时；描述状态用形容词。

× When I finish finish one day work because of the work is tired, the work is tough

✓ When I finish a day's work I feel tired because the work is tough.

原句存在多处问题：1) finish repeated，去掉重复；2) one day work 用 a day's work 或 one day's work 表示“一天的工作”；3) because of the work is tired 语法错误，应为 I feel tired because...，因为主语应是人而不是工作；4) 句子需要连贯的时态，这里用完成一天工作后（finish a day's work）接着说明感觉，用一般现在时或现在完成时均可，但保持一致更自然。建议：用 a day's work 表示“一天的工作”，并把感觉的主语放在前面。

× When I feel tired I often take a rest and eat something to feel energy.

✓ When I feel tired I often take a rest and eat something to get energy.

原句中 use of feel energy 不地道，应使用 get energy 或 feel energetic；更自然的表达是 get energy（获得能量）或 feel energetic（感到精力充沛）。此外，时态使用一般现在时描述习惯正确。建议：用 get energy 或 feel energetic 来表达“恢复精力”。

× After that I will go to exercise to keep health

✓ After that I go to exercise to keep healthy.

句子描述习惯动作，应使用一般现在时而不是 will。keep health 表达不自然，应使用 keep healthy 或 keep my health。建议：当说保持健康时，用 keep healthy 或 keep my health；描述常做的事用一般现在时。