Tiredness— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ не очень естественен и содержит грамматические ошибки. Сократите ответ до одной-двух предложений, исправьте порядок слов и время, избегайте разговорных сокращений. Добавьте конкретику — сколько часов вы учитесь и почему это утомляет. Используйте связку для плавности.

例: Yes, I often feel tired because I study for long hours most days. For example, I usually study for four to six hours a day preparing for exams, which leaves me feeling exhausted.

提案: Ответ нечёткий и содержит фразу, которую трудно понять ("get to know sleep"). Избегайте абсолютных слов вроде "always" без пояснений. Дайте конкретные ситуации и используйте связки (for example, especially). Исправьте ошибки построения предложения.

例: I usually feel tired in the evenings, especially after long study sessions or physical training. For instance, after a two-hour workout or a full day of classes, I tend to feel very sleepy.

提案: Короткий ответ, но уместный. Улучшите естественность, добавив детали и связочное слово, объясняющее эффект действий. Избегайте слов типа "just" без необходимости и расширьте ответ до 2–3 предложений, чтобы показать ширину словарного запаса.

例: When I feel tired, I usually make a cup of tea and lie down for about twenty minutes to rest. If that doesn't help, I go for a short walk to refresh my mind.

× Yeah, I for often feel tired because I have a lot of study to do.

✓ Yeah, I often feel tired because I have a lot of studying to do.

The adverb 'often' is misplaced; it should come after the subject and before the main verb. Also 'a lot of study' is unnatural here; use the gerund 'studying' to refer to the activity. Suggestion: place adverbs like 'often' after the subject ('I often') and use 'a lot of' + gerund ('a lot of studying').

× I always feel tired, especially after studying and training. I also get to know sleep.

✓ I always feel tired, especially after studying and training. I also become sleepy.

'Get to know sleep' is not a correct English expression. To express the state of feeling the need for sleep, use 'become sleepy' or 'feel sleepy'. Keep the present simple 'become' to match 'I always feel tired.' Suggestion: use natural collocations like 'become sleepy' or 'feel sleepy.'

× I make tea and just lie on the bed.

✓ I make tea and just lie on the bed.

This sentence is mostly acceptable, but native speakers usually say 'lie in bed' rather than 'lie on the bed.' Use the preposition 'in' when referring to being in bed for rest or sleep. Suggestion: say 'lie in bed.'