Tiredness— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答太简短，缺乏细节和连贯性。建议用主题句直接回应然后补充原因或频率，使用连接词使表达更自然。例如说明疲劳的频率、原因或影响。注意控制在不超过5句内，并使用更丰富的词汇。

例: Yes, I often feel tired, especially in the evenings after work. This is usually because I work long hours and sometimes skip exercise, which leaves me low on energy. As a result, I try to go to bed earlier on weekends to recover.

提案: 回答虽然给出频率，但缺乏情境和细节。建议说明一天中具体时段（如早晨/下午/晚上）并解释原因或举例，使用连接词如“because”或“so”。保持句子自然且不冗长。

例: I tend to feel tired every day in the late afternoon because I have a busy morning of meetings and then spend several hours commuting. Consequently, my energy dips around 4 or 5 pm and I need a short break.

提案: 回答不完整且含糊，未直接说明具体行为或应对策略。建议首先简单回答常做的事情，然后补充具体方法或例子，使用连接词如“so”或“then”。尽量用多样词汇描述休息或提神的方式。

例: When I feel tired at work, I usually take a short five-minute break and stretch or get a glass of water. If possible, I also go for a quick walk outside to re-energize before returning to my tasks.

× When I'm working.

✓ When I'm working, I often take short breaks or stretch.

句子结构不完整（Sentence fragment），原句缺少主句和谓语，只是一个时间状语从句，回答面试官的问题时需要提供完整句子或补充主要信息。建议在从句后加上主句，说明在工作时你具体做什么，例如‘I often take short breaks or stretch.’ 这样既完整又与上下文连贯。

× Yes, I feel tired.

✓ Yes, I feel tired.

该句语法本身为现在时陈述句，符合语境，无需改动。保持现在时描述一般状态是正确的。

× I feel tired every day.

✓ I feel tired every day.

该句为正确的现在时一般陈述，表达习惯性状态。无需修改。

× When would you feel tired? (Examiner)

✓ When do you feel tired? (Examiner)

考官原问句使用了‘would’，在询问习惯性或常态时更自然应使用一般现在时‘do’。‘When would you feel tired?’会用于假设情境或条件句，和此处询问习惯不匹配。