Tiredness— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a direct topic sentence then add brief supporting details (frequency, reasons, or context). Use 2–4 sentences, include linking words and specific examples. Avoid one-word answers.

例: Yes, I often feel tired, especially in the late afternoon after work. For example, I usually wake up early and work long hours at a computer, so by 4–5 pm I start to feel sluggish. To combat this, I take a short walk or a 20-minute nap, which helps me regain energy.

提案: Answer the question directly with a time or situation (topic sentence), then explain why and give a specific example. Use linking words like "usually", "because", or "for example" to make your response coherent.

例: I usually feel tired in the evenings after a busy day because I spend a lot of time standing and commuting. For example, on days when I have meetings and then cook dinner, I feel exhausted by 9 pm and prefer to relax early.

提案: Start with a clear statement of what you do, then give 1–2 specific actions and a brief result or reason. Use linking words such as "so", "therefore", or "for instance" to connect ideas. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

例: When I feel tired, I usually take a short walk outside to refresh my mind. For instance, a 10-minute walk helps me breathe fresh air and reduces my fatigue, so I can continue working productively.

× Yes.

✓ Yes, I often do.

The student reply 'Yes.' to 'Do you often feel tired?' is grammatically acceptable but too brief. However, according to instruction 2 only correct mistakes that match the provided list. A better full answer 'Yes, I often do.' follows the structure of the question and uses the auxiliary verb 'do' for emphasis and clarity. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Yes, I like.

✓ I feel tired when I am busy or after a long day.

The examiner asked 'When would you feel tired?' The student's reply 'Yes, I like.' is unrelated and ungrammatical in context. This is a sentence structure/content error: the answer must state timing or conditions. The correction provides an appropriate response that fits tense and question meaning. Provide specific situations and maintain present simple for habitual situations. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Yes, I know.

✓ When I feel tired, I usually rest or take a short nap.

The question asked 'What do you do when you feel tired?' The student's 'Yes, I know.' does not answer the question and is structurally incorrect. The corrected sentence directly answers the question using present simple for habitual actions and includes clear actions. This fixes the sentence structure and relevance. Grammar problem type ID:26