Politeness— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Use the past tense consistently: “taught” and “was.” Add one specific example of how your parents taught you, such as saying “please” and “thank you.”

例: My parents taught me to be polite when I was a child. For example, they reminded me to say “please” and “thank you” whenever I asked for something.

提案: Avoid repeating the same word and correct the phrase “it is respect for to respect others.” Explain that politeness shows respect and helps people communicate comfortably.

例: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it shows respect for other people. It also helps us communicate more comfortably and maintain good relationships.

提案: Answer the question directly by saying that people should be polite all the time, especially in specific situations. Use correct sentence structure and mention examples such as speaking to teachers, elders, or strangers.

例: We should be polite at all times, especially when speaking to teachers, older people, or strangers. For instance, we should listen carefully and use polite expressions when asking for help.

提案: Use the past tense consistently: “showed” and “talked.” Replace “alternative people” with “other people,” and explain your actions clearly, such as greeting people, listening carefully, or using “please” and “thank you.”

例: When I was a child, I showed politeness by greeting other people respectfully. I also listened when they were speaking and used phrases such as “please,” “thank you,” and “excuse me.”

× My parents teach me how to be polite when I was a child.

✓ My parents taught me how to be polite when I was a child.

The sentence refers to a completed period in the past, so the past-tense form taught is required instead of teach.

× Yes, I think being polite is very important because it is respect for to respect others.

✓ Yes, I think being polite is very important because it is about respecting others.

After the preposition about, use the gerund form respecting, not the infinitive to respect.

× Yes, I think being polite is very important because it is respect for to respect others.

✓ Yes, I think being polite is very important because it means showing respect for others.

The original sentence has an incorrect structure and repeats the idea of respect awkwardly. The structure means showing respect for others is clear and grammatically complete.

× being polite is not occasionally we should be polite always

✓ Being polite is not occasional; we should always be polite.

Occasional is the adjective needed after is to describe being polite. Occasionally is an adverb and cannot be used in that position.

× being polite is not occasionally we should be polite always

✓ Being polite is not occasional; we should always be polite.

The adverb always normally comes before the main verb be in this sentence. Therefore, always be polite is correct, not be polite always.

× being polite is not occasionally we should be polite always

✓ Being polite is not occasional; we should always be polite.

The original contains two clauses joined without suitable punctuation or a conjunction. Separating the clauses with a semicolon makes the sentence clear and complete.

× I show politeness when I was talking to alternative people I respect them by saying some manners

✓ I showed politeness when I was talking to other people. I respected them by using polite language.

The sentence describes a past childhood experience, so show and respect must be changed to the past-tense forms showed and respected.

× I show politeness when I was talking to alternative people I respect them by saying some manners

✓ I showed politeness when I was talking to other people. I respected them by using polite language.

Alternative usually means another choice or option, so it is not the appropriate adjective here. Other people is the natural expression. Also, using polite language is more appropriate than saying some manners.

× I show politeness when I was talking to alternative people I respect them by saying some manners

✓ I showed politeness when I was talking to other people. I respected them by using polite language.

The original joins several independent ideas without punctuation or a conjunction. Dividing it into two sentences makes the meaning clearer and avoids a run-on sentence.